Phoenix23

Wow. This is amazing. I wish I could hear you sing this one :). The topic you chose is one of the biggest issues of the modern world. Racism and ...

This is really good. I liked the way you portrayed the theme. Yes, the streets are never silent and life keeps moving on. And yet, on the same streets there ...

This is the sort of piece that sends chills down your spine. "yet each man kills the thing he loves..." this quote has always intrigued me. Yes, sometimes desire and ...

This is a really good beginning of a novel. It seemed a bit confused in the beginning, but clears in the end and captures the readers interest. I like the ...

I think this is a beginning of a great mystery. The plot is strong and the characters are intriguing. You have described the emotions very well here. I look forward ...

This is a really good poem, and on a controversial issue. Coming from a country where dictatorship and tyranny is a norm, I can relate to the poem.The tyrants always ...

This is very good poem. The emotions you have described are really vivid, and in a way, I can relate to them. When you long for a person, it is ...

Firstly, welcome back Aj :). This is a really good poem. The flow of the poem is smooth and perfect. This is what I liked best about it. The theme, ...

I am not really good at reviewing stuff, I will try to be helpful though.. Okay, so this piece here was cute to read, though it was a bit cliched. ...

Hello! This is a good poem. Even if you didn't use rhymes, the poem had a certain flow to it that I liked. The theme here is really good. Love ...

This is a really thoughtful piece. In fact, it struck straight home. Most of us are the part of the "herd mentality" as you call it. When was the last ...

Beautiful poem. The language is really smooth and flowing. The way you captured that "finding the one" theme is really cute. They are right, it is every girl's dream to ...

Hey there. This was a good one. Made me laugh :). You know these ad people and the stuff they show, sometimes they show things which are way far from ...

Hello there. You know I can understand the emotion you described in the story. Sometimes you do feel that way, like all is lost and you just don't want to..... ...

Hey. This is a good one. Your imagery is real good. i liked the way the story moves. Especially the thoughts of the main character. The lines, "So what if ...