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Re: Panic Attack Part Two
This was really good. I really enjoyed reading this. I think you can add a little more detail though. It was kinda skimpy on it. You did not add as ...
Oct 25, 2015 -
Re: Chester's Finest
This was so funny! I like how the characters kinda add to each other. They both make it seem funnier! I find it very entertaining, how Sydney kinda reads Cyril's ...
Oct 25, 2015 -
Re: 10 Reasons why Nate is Afraid of Cellphones
I love this already! I have only read reason one, and it is hilarious! In this paragraph, there could be a few more punctuation. I like it so far! So ...
Oct 25, 2015 -
Re: All That's Left
This was pretty cool. I like the descriptions, the details, and the concept. You showed an awesome set of skills. This is one of the main problems I keep seeing ...
Oct 25, 2015 -
Re: Kin
This was really good. I like the concept of the story, and your writing. You have exceptional skills! This writing was really good. I love details in stories, and this ...
Oct 25, 2015 -
Re: The Darkest of Dreams- Chapter 1
Wow! That is literally all I have to say after reading this. I did not pay attention to caps, or punctuation. I also only skimmed this. It was absolutely awesome! ...
Oct 24, 2015 -
Re: Methinks We're In Trouble
What just happened? This confused me with just the title! Methinks We're In Trouble. I was like, "Wait, What?" This was really good. I like the way everything fit. It ...
Oct 24, 2015 -
Re: Double-two, Double-two
PerfectWeapon here, So just real quick, in the beginning you started a sentence with "and," I don't recommend that. Soon after that, you started a sentence with "But," this created ...
Oct 24, 2015 -
Re: Not What It Looks Like 2.0
WOAH. This was awesome! I honestly have no remarks except, I loved the way you had the detail you did, especially for only the limit of, 250? This was so ...
Oct 24, 2015 -
Re: The Stone of Wishes
Hai Chrissy, PerfectWeapon here for a review! One of the things I noticed, is that you made a lot of grammatical errors. You said you wrote this in English, so ...
Oct 20, 2015 -
Re: Bra Crumbs
Okay this was absolutely funny. I have that issue everyday. (I have huge breasts, so it is impossible to not have it happen.) My question is, why? What inspired you ...
Oct 20, 2015 -
Re: Never trust the Neighbors
Hai! PerfectWeapon here! Ok so this is so far amazing! (I'm writing the review as I see mistakes so I don't fully know yet. ^_^) The first thing I saw ...
Sep 30, 2015 -
Re: A Walk In The Woods
Hai PerfectWeapon here! right off in the beginning I see no capitalization! This is is irking to me, for either one of two reasons. Rather A: You don't understand capitalization, ...
Sep 24, 2015 -
Re: Blood, Death and Hatred
This was a great story! However, there were a few grammatical error. "Just fora moment" This was just a space that was forgotten, but it was still there. It bathed ...
Apr 21, 2015 -
Re: The Model Family
Ok, so I like this idea. However, I feel like this idea has been stressed before. In the reviews, I saw that someone had seen it on an episode of ...
Apr 21, 2015