PerfectWeapon

This was really good. I really enjoyed reading this. I think you can add a little more detail though. It was kinda skimpy on it. You did not add as ...

This was so funny! I like how the characters kinda add to each other. They both make it seem funnier! I find it very entertaining, how Sydney kinda reads Cyril's ...

I love this already! I have only read reason one, and it is hilarious! In this paragraph, there could be a few more punctuation. I like it so far! So ...

This was pretty cool. I like the descriptions, the details, and the concept. You showed an awesome set of skills. This is one of the main problems I keep seeing ...

This was really good. I like the concept of the story, and your writing. You have exceptional skills! This writing was really good. I love details in stories, and this ...

Wow! That is literally all I have to say after reading this. I did not pay attention to caps, or punctuation. I also only skimmed this. It was absolutely awesome! ...

What just happened? This confused me with just the title! Methinks We're In Trouble. I was like, "Wait, What?" This was really good. I like the way everything fit. It ...

PerfectWeapon here, So just real quick, in the beginning you started a sentence with "and," I don't recommend that. Soon after that, you started a sentence with "But," this created ...

WOAH. This was awesome! I honestly have no remarks except, I loved the way you had the detail you did, especially for only the limit of, 250? This was so ...

Hai Chrissy, PerfectWeapon here for a review! One of the things I noticed, is that you made a lot of grammatical errors. You said you wrote this in English, so ...

Okay this was absolutely funny. I have that issue everyday. (I have huge breasts, so it is impossible to not have it happen.) My question is, why? What inspired you ...

Hai! PerfectWeapon here! Ok so this is so far amazing! (I'm writing the review as I see mistakes so I don't fully know yet. ^_^) The first thing I saw ...

Hai PerfectWeapon here! right off in the beginning I see no capitalization! This is is irking to me, for either one of two reasons. Rather A: You don't understand capitalization, ...

This was a great story! However, there were a few grammatical error. "Just fora moment" This was just a space that was forgotten, but it was still there. It bathed ...

Ok, so I like this idea. However, I feel like this idea has been stressed before. In the reviews, I saw that someone had seen it on an episode of ...