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Yo Maggie! Here for the second! :D I like this much better than the Set in Stone poem, there's a nicer rhythm and I'm more behind the way the language ...

Hey Maggie, You made a request and thus I am here to deliver on it. The rhythm in your first stanza is off. That might be on purpose because you're ...

Cap'n! I am so glad to see a poem from you, it's been so long I feel and I've definitely missed your voice something fierce. This is a really good ...

Nia! I wanted to stop by and lay some love on you - what a great title you have! ;) You already know that I think this is devastatingly good. ...

Hey Hippyhoodrat! I really, really love the concept of this poem. I think the title is exceptionally well chosen and your refrain of "we learned how to kiss silently" is ...

Yo Aleycat, I'm glad that the formatting worked out for you in the end! I'll begin with how I cheated and looked through your comments to explain the "pad" bit ...

Hey Princess, Laying down a review here cause Review Day and also Team Tortoise. It's been a while since I've looked at a poem of yours to review rather than ...

Hey Ancifo, There is something about your story that I can't quite grasp. I think it's that it's an experience without purpose? In a short story it is hard to ...

Hi Hippyhoodrat! :) I like where you've decided to go with this poem, you're not saturating your reader in details we may not care about, even if the narrator does. ...

Hi Ticktock, This is an interesting poem, an I'm not sure after reading it what your intent was here. Were you looking to write a series poem, or were you ...

Hey RompahPomp! I've reviewed @fortis and @Arkhaion with their poems of the same title, so I thought I'd tackle yours as it's still in the featured works section. Aren't you ...

Hey Ancifo, This is the best poem I think I've ever seen from you. The images are solid and ringing, they hang heavily across each line and weight the poem ...

Hi ChocolateCello, This is a very interesting poem. That you wrote this in five minutes doesn't surprise me, but I wish that you would consider editing or revising your poetry ...

Hey Unfunnyguy, I really like the intense feelings and emotions that are so clear in this poem. You've done really well to effectively and efficiently put your message into the ...

Forticuno my love! This is a beautiful poem and you know this cause I was excited about you posting it. You've got such a beautiful way with language sometimes and ...