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Yo Sharon, Having looked at La mort est belle; Part I, I've come to have a look at Part II and comment. :) Firstly, I think this is a much ...

Hey Sharon! I know you've got a couple reviews on this work already but I wanted to have a look at the Part II and wanted to make sure I ...

Hello again! Now I was joking in that last poem that I was following Hannah, but it does actually seem like I am! I didn't realise this was your poem ...

Hi Frinderman! I'm following Hannah around, reviewing poetry, which turned out to be an excellent idea because I've never read your poetry before and it's so polished! It's so very ...

Hi Girl! I am totally on board with Hannah in that the rhyme you've got here is not very forced at all! We're in the same camp that basically laments ...

Hi Aubrey and Saruka! It's so interesting to write a poem with another person! I hope you guys had a really great time writing together and that we'll see some ...

Hey Dreamy, This is an interesting piece and I enjoyed some of the description you had playing through your lines because it gave me a really good sense of Kay ...

Hi Nass, This is an interesting prose poem you have here! I like that you're comparing love to a wallet because I don't think I've ever read that before, and ...

My buttercup, my flower, let's do this. Okay, so I'm 100% behind the dynamic between Persephone and Taurus that you're exploring here, this idea that the Taurus calms because she ...

Hey bruv, Here as requested. I think you have an interesting beginning to your story, there is definitely a sense of intrigue and tension that you play out well throughout ...

Hi Zoe, I haven't read any of the other reviews on this so I'm sorry if I repeat anything someone has said before me. This prologue is giving some important ...

Yo LilBizquit, I actually am pretty into this as a piece of slightly abstract poetry. Except that it isn't really abstract, it just uses the licence plate numbers really effectively ...

Hey Holyrocks! I love me some time travel work, poetry or prose. I like the direction you're taking this, it feels smooth and well considered. There are some things I ...

Hi RedHead! I really like what you're going for with this poem, the concept is pretty solid and I think the bones of what you're doing is working out. However, ...

Hi Night, Your first line lies heavy on my chest and I love it. I haven't read the rest of the poem yet, I just had to express how lovely ...