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I've always hated child abuse. It's truly evil. You should be thanked for spreading news about this.

LOL. Short but funny. You might want to capitalize the beginning, though. The flames of hell are nothing against ice. But if Hell freezes over, you will need a candle, ...

This is funny, Mr. Weird Al Yankovic! Only, who sings the 1st stanza, or paragraph? I was just thinking about volcanoes today, so that's weird.

It is good you took the time to put in animal species. Also, it was cool how you compared the people in the military to strong animals. It was nice ...

My favorite stanza, or paragraph, was most definitely number four. Sounds like the little girl takes a lot of heat from her parents. Then the older sister helps. I think ...

There is other fish in the sea. And than again, despite the last few lines, it seems like he still loves you and you still love him. Most people you ...

It's good that it's a happy ending. Only, was his wife mistreating him? Will he divorce her, now?

Simple, yet good. Sounds more like the wind tossing around sleeves, though.

All these names of corporations. They distract from the story. I wonder what possessed him to spare the emperor?

I like the name of the ship, The Blade. I don't know why you think it's stupid. I like how there's a variety of weapons, instead of just swords. Ones ...

First, I should say that the parrot, Capo's revealing that he IS a parrot, should've been revealed sooner. I thought he was a dragon. I like how she talks about ...

It's tough when u're the jealous type. Nice manga pic.

Welcome to WMS! So, u had trouble in a mental hospital? Here's my analyzing: Screaming to the world and sky is trying to get "normal" people to help. I also ...

Yeah, ur right, NicolMemo. Sorry guys.