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Hi Dancer, That was so sweet and so sad. I have a mother like that, who was so proud of my first story when I was six, scribbled in pen. ...

Hi Boo! I love the whole idea of the poem, and I think that it is mostly true- although I am a reject myself and am certainly not broken. I ...

Wow. Just... wow. This has to be one of the most horrific things I have ever read, which is very high praise. Beautifully crafted. The main character of the first ...

Hi, Clock! A great poem with an even better message. Your poem has a good rhyme scheme and a fairly good rhythm as well. The only thing that was unclear ...

Hey, Sherlock! A great story. I loved it in diary format, and I usually hate that type of writing. I also liked the subject matter, and I think that you ...

I have to say, this was a very interesting piece. I myself was in school and still am in school in the United States, and the schools that I attended ...

Overall i enjoyed reading this, although there are a few things that need fixing. In "I remember the day like a plain Tuesday; a sleepy morning, with gray air and ...

While I do not speak French, I can in fact use an online translator. While it did not get every word right in the context, I could basically decipher the ...

Awesomeness. I myself am obsessed with all things zombie (as are my friends) and I have to say this is awesome. No criticisms or complaints. I hope you don't mind ...

Beautiful. This poem was terribly, terribly beautiful. You have captured this feeling of lonliness absolutely perfectly. It is not overly dramatic while still being packed with emotion, which is a ...

Overall I thought that it was a good- albiet depressing- piece. It was very relatable as well. Although I do not feel the same way about my dad, I have ...

I love this poem. No criticisms at all. Absolutely the most true thing I have ever read. Absolutely awesome. I think that both Rupulicans and Democrats would agree that this ...

That was a very good, interesting story. Even so, I do have a few critiques. Let's start with the nitty-gritty mechanics of spelling, puntuation and tense. In the first paragraph, ...

This is fantastic. I completely relate to being afraid of writing and having others see my work. I think they'll think that I am absolutely insane. I'm afraid that if ...

That was absolutely amazing. I am literally tearing up now becuase of both its beauty and the beauty of the intent behind it. Very few things make me cry. I ...