PeijiRestoration

Thank you!

Thank you! I was originally leaving out punctuation for stylistic reasons, but the poem might actually look better if it was more proper. Thanks again!

Glad to help!

Glad to help :)

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thank you!!!

Thanks for the review!

I failed to realize the contradiction at the end when I first wrote it, so thank you for pointing that out. I just fixed it.

Thank you for the feedback!

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Yeah, your's makes more sense lol

Yeah originally I was just going for a guy sort of "becoming one with the forest" so I guess that could be interpreted as his corpse decaying (gruesome!) or him ...

I'm never going to not laugh at this. It's seriously hilarious. The "absolutely done" part was my favorite. Anyway, keep writing!

Thank you!!!!!

Thank you! And I love your interpretation of it being about a tree. I never thought about that! :)