PeijiRestoration

Peiji here for a review! Hope you’re having a good day! Or night. Or evening. Or afternoon. Or whenever you’re reading this. Anyway, I love this poem so much! I ...

First off, welcome to YWS! I’m so glad you joined! Secondly, same. This poem is extremely relatable. I love being able to go home, and finally enter complete weeb mode! ...

Wow, this is good! I liked that you let the reader choose the ending, which is cool in itself, but is made even cooler by the fact that your reasoning ...

Wow, this is good! The shifts between Eddy's thoughts and his mother's life were executed very well. In the beginning, the shifts were just interesting, but at the end, when ...

I love this! This is truly one of the best poems I've read on this site. It was a beautiful, heartbreaking concept, and one that you executed very well. The ...

Wow, I really like this! I can't wait to see where you go with this. I only noticed two mistakes, and I'm pretty sure both of them were just typing ...

Hello, Peiji here for a review! I only saw two things I thought were confusing about the story that weren't already mentioned by another reviewer. One was the fact that ...

I love this! The writing contributes well to the feeling of fake happiness, and the whole thing has a synthetic feeling. I noticed only three errors. In the line "White ...

Whoa, I really like this! I love the way you began this, with a thing calculated and analyzing, but yet so personal. The writing as a whole is intriguing, and ...

Hello! Peiji here for a review! I'll start off by saying that this is shaping up to be a great story. I particularly liked the description of the mutant, which ...

Hey! Peiji here for a review! Honestly, this is heartbreaking. The idea of growing apart from someone you love is tragic, and you convey that feeling well. That being said, ...

Wow, so I absolutely love this. As pointed out by another commenter, "slippery as sand" creates a wonderful image of time running out, and the idea growing into a tomb ...

Have you ever seen a poem so beautiful you started crying? I immediately felt compelled to give you the nine dollars I have in my backpack and say "this is ...

Hi! Okay, I adore the way you wrote this! You used second person perspective so well! Anyway, on to the nitpick section! :) The sentence "Some of them, I stated, ...

Hi! I want to start this out by saying that I really like this. I'm very interested to see where it goes. Two parts I particularly liked were your likening ...