PeanutPhoebe

Wow. This was super good. I loved Castor's rebelliousness as a child. I did notice a few grammar errors. For instance, when you adress someone as mother or father it ...

Hey!! just found this... I love this!! The rythm is just a bit off, but I love the theme. Why didn't I know about this one?? Great use of words, ...

PeanutPhoebe, here for a review!! Wow. AMAZING!!!! My youth pastor writes and publishes songs a lot, and this is as good as one of his. (Which are pretty good) Just... ...

Ummm...Honestly don't know what to say to this. I mean, there is no resolution. No denoument. (that's the ending, in French, I think.) So, my first complaint would be language. ...

Hi! So this will sort of be a review, sort of not. So I loved this. Period. It's amazing! Being a huge Disney fan, it was cool to have someone ...

PeanutPhoebe here to give you a review! So great idea with this story here! It's a pretty interesting storyline. While there were A LOT of grammatical mistakes, (most of them ...

Hi! PeanutPhoebe here to give you a review. Love your idea here. Pretty cool! You have a lot of grammar mistakes, especially punctuation-wise, but that's easily fixable! :) So, I ...

Wow. I absolutely loved this! You did really great. The ending was the best, and pretty unexpected. My favorite part was the names. I really don't have hardly any complaints. ...

Great job once again! I noticed several typos, which can be easily fixed. Also, like the person before me said, your dialogue is uneven. You have a lot, and then ...

Wow. You really catch your readers in this. I wanted to keep going, but yet, I didn't, knowing something awful would happen. You're wording is very good. I love the ...

Oh yeah, one more thing I forgot to say. I think for a ten-year-old girl, April is a bit too mature, if that's how you wanna say it. Ten-year-olds aren't ...

PeanutPhoebe, here to give you a review! so, you did pretty great with this. I think you could have put paragraphs together more, (except dialogue) but that's just me. I ...

Wow. Nice curveball! Love it. At first, I thought the daughter was in jail and had changed her name, but you totally surprised me! Great job with this. I loved ...

Great Job! This is very interesting. The end definitely makes you want to know what happens... I love that he's so awkward and she just is so sweet and understands. ...

Wow. Interesting. You said you wrote this with someone else? That's really good coordination. Love it. Love that you have "Chapters" with the view from each person. It sorta gives ...