PeanutPhoebe

Hi! Oh my goodness. This is amazing! I can't wait to read more. I love your building of the plot. It's great how you've been able to move it along. ...

Oh, wow. I'm starting to pick up more of the story. Falyn is something special, but it seems she doesn't know. And Lightport. I think it's a special place for ...

Ok, so once again, I love this. I definitely like how you're changing the point of views from which it's written. I really like Akia's character, she's mysterious and obviously ...

Wow. Now I definitely can't wait for more. It gives me a lot of questions. I love the little crush she has on Sam, but he seems to see her ...

Hi! I love fantasy, so I decided to start at the beginning so I can review your other chapters as well. So, you seem to have an interesting character here. ...

Wow. This is amazing! No kidding. I loved it. One question I have though is this: What are the small letter Roman numerals for? As a reader, I wanted to ...

Wow. This was a beautifully written piece. I don't know what to say. You didn't have any grammar mistakes that I noticed, so that's good. It's well-edited. This truly captured ...

Good job! This caught my attention almost immediately. While I am a bit confused on some of the events, it was beautifully written. You were descriptive, but not too wordy. ...

Wow. Never actually heard of something like this. It's very interesting. So, it's almost like an inspiration for a story? I like that. So, my understanding is this. An innocent ...

Wow. Amazing! To be honest though, it took me a minute to realize this was a dog. I guess I kinda missed the licking part:). So, I so now how ...

Hey Messenger! Here to give you a review! So first off, I love that you put Miles and Jeric in this a lot. I liked Jeric's wisdom, and his examples, ...

Ok, here I am to review, like I said. :) Sorry for not getting to it earlier. So, I liked it. To get the nasty grammar out of the way, ...

Ok, wow. So, like @Iggy said, if the first half was just a recording, why was there more than dialogue? I like that you signified the counselor by making it ...

Hey, great job! I have a few nitpicks. Age? Names? Marriage? Those were a bit confusing. I liked how you really didn't reveal the intent of the story until the ...

Hey, PeanutPhoebe here to give you a review. Now that I finally got to it:) So, first off is that I saw several grammar errors (that can be easily fixed) ...