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PeanutPhoebe

PeanutPhoebe

  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Romantic Re: Polluted Romance (First time I ever wrote in second person)

    Wow. Very different from anything I've ever read before. I'll admit, it took me about half the peice to realize 'you' was actually a robot/machine. It was very good, although ...

    Nov 18, 2013
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: I'll always be there

    Well, hello, would you like a review? PeanutPhoebe here to give you one. Okay, so I really don't know where to start. First of all, like the first reviewer, I ...

    Nov 18, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: Chapter 1: Emma

    PeanutPhoebe, here for a review!! Okay, so this was an interesting beginning. The grammar, including spelling, punctuation, and capitalization, could definitely be improved, but hey, we all started ou

    Nov 14, 2013
  • Short Story » General, Narrative Re: Don't Forget to Stamp Your Ticket

    Hello, PeanutPhoebe here for a review. First off, like I told someone else just yesterday, I don't appreciate the cussing. I'm a Christian, and God's Word says not to do ...

    Nov 12, 2013
  • Short Story » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: Rain

    PeanutPhoebe, here for a review!! First off, I don't appreciate the cussing or taking God's name in vain. I'm a Christian, and God says in His Word not to do ...

    Nov 11, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: What Is Love?

    PeanutPhoebe, here to give you a review!! Wow. This was amazing!! I loved the shape and stanzas. The simplicity of words, while still descriptive, was really good. One technical thing: ...

    Nov 11, 2013
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: October

    PeanutPhoebe, here for a review!! Umm...okay, where do I start? First of all, I really don't see much of a point to this story. Just some girl whose friend is ...

    Nov 10, 2013
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: If the World Could Only Love Me

    PeanutPhoebe, here for a review!! Ok, so this was awesome. Loved the shortness and simplicity of it. The first line really drew me in. However, I did feel a need ...

    Nov 10, 2013
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, Dramatic Re: deleted

    PeanutPhoebe, here for a review!! First off, I loved this. I would have liked a tiny bit more info on Sean, but I think I could find that in the ...

    Nov 8, 2013
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Photograph

    PeanutPhoebe here, would you like a review? Wow. This was amazing. Loved the way Sam was so real, I could see him walking down that street. I like how you ...

    Nov 1, 2013
  • Article / Essay » Culture, Dramatic Re: Voice of Democracy, Audio Essay

    PeanutPhoebe, here for a review!! First off, you did really well. I LOVED the last bit. At first I was like, "All she's doing is telling the story of America..." ...

    Oct 31, 2013
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: VFW Essay Contest Entry (What Patriotism Means To Me)

    PeanutPhoebe, here to review!! hey, so I also participated in this essay contest (not this particular topic, but my BFF did) and I know that the word limit is either ...

    Oct 31, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Fly

    PeanutPhoebe, here for a review!! Okay, so this was an interesting poem, but to me it almost seemed like a list. One technical thing: "Do not open you eyes." That ...

    Oct 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: I wish that you knew.

    PeanutPhoebe, here to give you a review!! First off, even though this is a short poem, it's sweet, simple, and a little bit sad, but that's okay.;) Like I say ...

    Oct 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: Each Day

    PeanutPhoebe, here for a review!! (if I can think of enough things to say about something this short to make it long enough to be a review) Well done!! I'm ...

    Oct 27, 2013


Who wants to become a writer? And why? Because it’s the answer to everything. It’s the streaming reason for living. To note, to pin down, to build up, to create, to be astonished at nothing, to cherish the oddities, to let nothing go down the drain, to make something, to make a great flower out of life, even if it’s a cactus.
— Enid Bagnold