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Re: Polluted Romance (First time I ever wrote in second person)
Wow. Very different from anything I've ever read before. I'll admit, it took me about half the peice to realize 'you' was actually a robot/machine. It was very good, although ...
Nov 18, 2013 -
Re: I'll always be there
Well, hello, would you like a review? PeanutPhoebe here to give you one. Okay, so I really don't know where to start. First of all, like the first reviewer, I ...
Nov 18, 2013 -
Re: Chapter 1: Emma
PeanutPhoebe, here for a review!! Okay, so this was an interesting beginning. The grammar, including spelling, punctuation, and capitalization, could definitely be improved, but hey, we all started ou
Nov 14, 2013 -
Re: Don't Forget to Stamp Your Ticket
Hello, PeanutPhoebe here for a review. First off, like I told someone else just yesterday, I don't appreciate the cussing. I'm a Christian, and God's Word says not to do ...
Nov 12, 2013 -
Re: Rain
PeanutPhoebe, here for a review!! First off, I don't appreciate the cussing or taking God's name in vain. I'm a Christian, and God says in His Word not to do ...
Nov 11, 2013 -
Re: What Is Love?
PeanutPhoebe, here to give you a review!! Wow. This was amazing!! I loved the shape and stanzas. The simplicity of words, while still descriptive, was really good. One technical thing: ...
Nov 11, 2013 -
Re: October
PeanutPhoebe, here for a review!! Umm...okay, where do I start? First of all, I really don't see much of a point to this story. Just some girl whose friend is ...
Nov 10, 2013 -
Re: If the World Could Only Love Me
PeanutPhoebe, here for a review!! Ok, so this was awesome. Loved the shortness and simplicity of it. The first line really drew me in. However, I did feel a need ...
Nov 10, 2013 -
Re: deleted
PeanutPhoebe, here for a review!! First off, I loved this. I would have liked a tiny bit more info on Sean, but I think I could find that in the ...
Nov 8, 2013 -
Re: The Photograph
PeanutPhoebe here, would you like a review? Wow. This was amazing. Loved the way Sam was so real, I could see him walking down that street. I like how you ...
Nov 1, 2013 -
Re: Voice of Democracy, Audio Essay
PeanutPhoebe, here for a review!! First off, you did really well. I LOVED the last bit. At first I was like, "All she's doing is telling the story of America..." ...
Oct 31, 2013 -
Re: VFW Essay Contest Entry (What Patriotism Means To Me)
PeanutPhoebe, here to review!! hey, so I also participated in this essay contest (not this particular topic, but my BFF did) and I know that the word limit is either ...
Oct 31, 2013 -
Re: Fly
PeanutPhoebe, here for a review!! Okay, so this was an interesting poem, but to me it almost seemed like a list. One technical thing: "Do not open you eyes." That ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: I wish that you knew.
PeanutPhoebe, here to give you a review!! First off, even though this is a short poem, it's sweet, simple, and a little bit sad, but that's okay.;) Like I say ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: Each Day
PeanutPhoebe, here for a review!! (if I can think of enough things to say about something this short to make it long enough to be a review) Well done!! I'm ...
Oct 27, 2013
