PatriciaTina

Hey there! I it took this long again, but I'm finally here! You wanted me to focus a bit more on the dialogue, so I'll just start with that right ...

Hey there! I saw you posted the link to this on my page a while back, but I seriously have not had the time to get on here long enough ...

Hey there! Again, I'm so sorry it took so long but your review is finally here! :D First off, I'd just like to say that what you have here is ...

Hey there! Again, I can't say enough how sorry I am for taking so long, but your review is finally here! So let's just get started.... (Hopefully I'm not repeating ...

Hey there! You have a very interesting concept here, and I'm intrigued as to where you are planning to take these characters. However, I do also find myself agreeing with ...

This was really good, I love the idea you're working with here. It makes you think more about what's behind our dreams. Writing it all from present tense is also ...

Hey there! Welcome to YWS, I saw your story and thought I'd drop off a review! Off we go. ;) First off, I will just point out any typos or ...

Hey there! I'm really sorry it took so long for me to get to this, but I'm finally here to drop off your review! Life can get busy sometimes, you ...

Hey there! Again, I am really sorry for taking so long to get to this, but here I am... Finally. ;) So, first off I'd just like to say that ...

Hi! So this is a bit of a short start to the story, so it does leave the reader wondering where you're going to go with it. But with that ...

Hi there! I'm Trish, and I'd just like to say welcome to YWS before jumping in with my review! I hope you're enjoying yourself here so far. If you ever ...

Hey there! My first impression of this was that it is quite short, and that is always a hard thing to work with. Getting your meaning across in so few ...

Hmmm, now what can I really say about this other than that I really, really liked it. It pulls me in and makes me want more, makes me need more. ...

Hey! So sorry it took so long for me to get back to you about your edited version, but I finally have enough time to give you a good review. ...

Hi! Sorry about that last post, I'm still trying to figure this all out! It's been so long since I've been on here... Way too long! But anyways, I'll just ...