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Re: Zegentia: The Roads of Marceris Ch.3 (Part 1)
Hey there! I it took this long again, but I'm finally here! You wanted me to focus a bit more on the dialogue, so I'll just start with that right ...
Jul 12, 2012 -
Re: Searching
Hey there! I saw you posted the link to this on my page a while back, but I seriously have not had the time to get on here long enough ...
Jun 14, 2012 -
Re: Untitled-Chapter One
Hey there! Again, I'm so sorry it took so long but your review is finally here! :D First off, I'd just like to say that what you have here is ...
Jun 14, 2012 -
Re: Return of the Gods #1: Artemis (Prologue and Chapter 1 - New Version)
Hey there! Again, I can't say enough how sorry I am for taking so long, but your review is finally here! So let's just get started.... (Hopefully I'm not repeating ...
Jun 7, 2012 -
Re: Dragon - Prologue
Hey there! You have a very interesting concept here, and I'm intrigued as to where you are planning to take these characters. However, I do also find myself agreeing with ...
May 14, 2012 -
Re: Dream Digestion
This was really good, I love the idea you're working with here. It makes you think more about what's behind our dreams. Writing it all from present tense is also ...
May 12, 2012 -
Re: Only Popular Counts.
Hey there! Welcome to YWS, I saw your story and thought I'd drop off a review! Off we go. ;) First off, I will just point out any typos or ...
May 12, 2012 -
Re: Welcome to Orba Nova Preface, Chapter 1-3
Hey there! I'm really sorry it took so long for me to get to this, but I'm finally here to drop off your review! Life can get busy sometimes, you ...
May 10, 2012 -
Re: Title Pending
Hey there! Again, I am really sorry for taking so long to get to this, but here I am... Finally. ;) So, first off I'd just like to say that ...
May 7, 2012 -
Re: Remaking You, chapter 1, part 1.
Hi! So this is a bit of a short start to the story, so it does leave the reader wondering where you're going to go with it. But with that ...
Apr 25, 2012 -
Re: Asylum
Hi there! I'm Trish, and I'd just like to say welcome to YWS before jumping in with my review! I hope you're enjoying yourself here so far. If you ever ...
Apr 6, 2012 -
Re: Elixir
Hey there! My first impression of this was that it is quite short, and that is always a hard thing to work with. Getting your meaning across in so few ...
Mar 9, 2012 -
Re: Barren
Hmmm, now what can I really say about this other than that I really, really liked it. It pulls me in and makes me want more, makes me need more. ...
Mar 1, 2012 -
Re: The Chronicles of the Core: Burns and Bruises- Chapter One
Hey! So sorry it took so long for me to get back to you about your edited version, but I finally have enough time to give you a good review. ...
Mar 1, 2012 -
Re: Cherry Pie and Heartache
Hi! Sorry about that last post, I'm still trying to figure this all out! It's been so long since I've been on here... Way too long! But anyways, I'll just ...
Feb 25, 2012