PastelSlushie

Hello there. Pastel here for a hopefully helpful review and some comments and opinions! At first reading the title, my first thought was that this was going to bash on ...

Hello, wetumbrella5. Pastel here for a hopefully helpful review and some comments and opinions! And since I haven't read the first part to this, please tell me if anything I ...

Hello, VegasLights. Pastel here for a hopefully helpful review and some comments and opinions! I won't say much on ways to improve this format and flow wise because this poem ...

Hello there, bet you thought I died or something. But I'm back, so let's get right into the review. One thing that confuses me is how Elijah didn't know about ...

Hi there, Pastel here for a hopefully helpful review and some comments! I won’t be able to give a full length proper review, so I’ll just make a couple of ...

Hi there. I've been planning a review for quite some time - so here I am! This seems to be a personal vent so I won't say anything on the ...

Hi there ancient poem. I'd firstly like to say although this review is late, I'm sorry about your grandma's situation. I hope she stayed strong throughout and that she's free ...

Hi there, This has suspense that I like. So, this chapter is the first time Julia and Kai are meeting, right? The way they conversated in the bathroom and Elijah's ...

Hi there, As IcyFlame had said, at the moment your characters aren't that distinguishable from each other. They don't seem to have a unique voice to them when they talk. ...

Hi there again, Again, this story is ancient, but oh well. This was a tad bit short so I may not have much to say that would be helpful, but ...

Hi there. This work is incredibly old but I was scrolling through the featured members, saw your profile, saw this, and here I am. The concept behind this is something ...

Hello again, jamgalloway, PastelSlushie here for review number 42 for #RevMo! Let's get right into it! I would firstly like to point out how sudden these two chapters seem. In ...

Hello, LukeStarkiller, PastelSlushie here for review number 41 for #RevMo! Let's get right into it! This seems to be pretty strong when talking about plot, but I feel there are ...

Hello again, jamgalloway, PastelSlushie here for review number 40 for #RevMo! Let's get right into it! HA. MY PREDICTION WAS CORRECT. THEIR FATHER IS A WEREWOLF. I STARTED THINKING THAT ...

Hello, SilpaS, PastelSlushie here for review number 39 for #RevMo! Let's get right into it! Also, welcome to YWS! It's great to see you've already posted something. The one that ...