PassionateReader

Happy review day!! Reader here to represent team green!!! Even tho this chapter is short, it tells me a lot. I haven't even read your whole story but this portion ...

Happy Review Day!! Go team green!!!!!!! I is sick in bed so good for you. Haha well let's get right into the review, shall we?? Ok. Before I get to ...

Here again on this marvelous review day!! Go team green!!! Omw. Can I just say.. Wow. Ok ok. This is the chapter I've been waiting for!! Questions answered, arguments resolved! ...

Hi again!!! Let's get right into to the review, shall we?? So right off the bat I noticed sooo many spelling/grammar errors in this chapter! But I trust you can ...

Hey!! Let's go team green!!!!! She, if she really is a she- mean her voice is womanly so I am assuming she is definitely a she-but I am not totally ...

Hey! Reader here representing team green!!!! :( Sadness!!! :'( Gahh! The school kids joked and teased, but never cried the silent tears that streamed down her face in the comfort ...

Hey!! Reader here to review on this beautiful review day! C'mon team green we can come back! So obliviously since I haven't read the other 83 chapters I'm pretty lost. ...

Review time. Again. More points. For team green. YAY!!! For starters, I think you should put a little somethin' between the note at the beginning and the actual chapter. Like ...

Hey!! I'm here to break my ongoing lameness and dormancy and will actually review!! :P It's also review day so I should. Go GREEN!!! So right off the bat I ...

Ahh!! It's getting sooo hard to write helpful reviews anymore because you don't need as much help! You're getting better every chapter and I can totally tell. Way to go!! ...

Wow. Just wow. "God is light and in Him is no darkness at all" *insert reference I can't remember* You completely embodied this verse in your poem and it's soooo ...

PReader here to review! Ok so I'm going out on a limb here, trying something new since I don't know that much of what makes a good song. Bear with ...

"You have 4 reviews till your next star" I'm sooo close!!!! So here to get closer :) Welp, r4 stole all my points. What to do, what to do? I ...

Oh my goodness. To me this chapter was better!! So much more relaxed and natural. As I'm reading the other reviews, I think we're all confused and not on the ...

Review time!! I know I'm sooooooo overdue on this but I'm here again. let me know when your sick and tired of me This chapter is so well written I ...