Paradaux

Hey there! Here's a somewhat shorter review than I normally do but here we go; In your first few lines you use 'Just a teardrop' but perhaps use 'Just a ...

This review is rated 18s+ Oh Catalyst, Oh Catalyst what a thing you have created today. You've managed to score a review from the highmaster archduke of reviewing, yours truly. ...

Hey there! This is pretty damn good for only 45 minutes it seems so well thought out and certainly well written. I really love how you described the first scene ...

I really enjoyed reading this poem, maybe because of the thought of someone actually loving me (I cri everytiem) or just your use of poetic devices. Certainly the most prominent ...

I've got to say you had lost me in the final stanzas I was not too sure what you were on about but i'll attempt to comment anyway seeing as ...

I haven't long to go and go a deep analysis of this piece of lyrical writing however I will comment on your use of structure and your perception of different ...

As soreymikleo said only a few grammar mistakes to be fixed from that point of view, throw it into grammarly and it will point them out for you I really ...

Prenote: This is my first review on the site ~ I've briefly looked over the rules and I apologize for any mishaps in advance. First of all I love how ...