Paolamarie1502

lol thanks

yeah i know its not easy lol and thanks :)

thanks :)

lol thanks

the poem was really good, i liked it but im not sure if the title really fits with the content but other than that very good :)

oh my god this a very good poem i can totally relate to this and im not going to lie after the first two lines i was hooked. Nicely done ...

this was a very nice piece of work that you did there but next time just make sure if youre going to use stanzas or not cause it might a ...

Wow! this poem was really good. I like the fact of how you express yourself and the rhyming was very good other than that i enjoyed it.

thanks for the opinions it is my first poem so ill take it as an advice

yes i sort of notice after i wrote it, and i needed to post something which was my homework but other than that thanks for the opinion ill take it ...

thanks alot i appriciate the opinions, plus is my first poem ill take the opinions as an advice

that is so freaking cute!

that is really sweet! i could relate to that feeling

thank you i apriciate the opinion, and yes i noticed i guess i didnt notice it the moment when i was writing it.

why thank you :)