Panikos

Okay, Javshanidze, this piece is in much need of a review. I'm not saying it doesn't have potential, but it really does need working on. Now, I have to confess ...

Hey cm57105, would you like a quick review? I like how this story is going. You've introduced just the right amount of mystery to draw me in, and I do ...

Hey, Kakali. :) So, this is a steady, promising start to your story. I'm pretty intrigued, if I'm honest, and I like the development of the idea at hand. This ...

Fabulous. Genuinely fabulous. On your other poem (Grab My Heart) I remarked that the balance between mystery and understanding wasn't quite there. This time? Spot on. I confess that I ...

Hey there, Mr Holmes. I'm liking the poem. I'm not the most clued-up on poetry, but I can say that I like this. There's some real gems in the piece ...

Hello, FantasyWriter. How about a review? Okay, let's start with some positives. I do really like the idea - this kind of story about a mysterious kid with a bigger ...

Hey, Pinktoes. I'm liking the piece. It's definitely one of the more strange, interesting ideas I've seen, and I'm intrigued to know more. The whole thing about the ever-changing mother ...

Hi, Addawen. How about a review? So, I'm liking the piece so far, and there's definitely more good than bad here. The plot is gripping, what with the dreams, the ...

Hello, Mikkie. How about a review? Obviously, Veeren has pointed out a couple of the errors already, but I'd like to offer a bit more advice. Soo... Firstly, this is ...

Hello, Dolwright. :) Firstly, I wish a merry Christmas to you too, and I have, by way of an early gift, a review for you. Let's look at the positives ...

Hello, Payne. :) I really like this piece. I like how you've re-booted the idea of vampires in a much grittier, modern way (I vastly prefer this format to that ...

Hey, Fernandez (can I call you that?) I liked this! It's very dark, engaging, and I really want to read more. Plotwise, you're heading in the right direction; I love ...

Hey, Mlawa ;) Okay, first things first, I generally like the idea you've got going. I like realistic and dramatic novels, and family issues are always an interesting subject. Nevertheless, ...

Hi, thesassqueen, I see you've got a bit of feedback, but I'm sure another review wouldn't hurt. Right, first things first, your punctuation and organisation is good . You seem ...

Hey, SuperStarFreakz, how about a review? I'm only going to do chapter one at the moment, just because there are a couple of things that need clearing up quickly. I'll ...