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Re: Super group!
Heya, mvb. Time for a quick review. :) I'm not going to beat around the bush telling you everything that's already been said - I'm sure that you know by ...
Feb 24, 2013 -
Re: Remember?
Heya, ReisePiecey. I'm just popping in for a short review seeing as reason seems to have covered a great deal of what needs to be said. Anyway, first of all, ...
Feb 24, 2013 -
Re: The Shadow's Light - Ch. 1
Hey, spiritwolf1011. This story isn't bad, I'll tell you now. In terms of the way you wrote it - punctuation, spelling, all that stuff - it was great. I didn't ...
Feb 24, 2013 -
Re: FREAK - Chapter 4
I'm really caught up in this. Your writing is so simple and to the point, its like something that you can just drink in gallons. There's none of this crushing ...
Feb 24, 2013 -
Re: High school: We Know DRAMA (Chapter 1)
Right, Inverted Clock. Here's my first review of the day. Okay, there's some good in here - you've made a grounded start, you've got some good characters, you've set the ...
Feb 24, 2013 -
Re: The Ones Who Understand: Chapter 1
Hi, Little Caroleen. This is a good beginning to your story, and I'm actually rather enjoying it. I like how fresh and simple your writing style is, and the way ...
Feb 20, 2013 -
Re: Where?
Hey, Shiny. Well, this poem's not bad, I'll say it now - it certainly gets better as it goes along. I'm no poet, so there's probably a lot of aspects ...
Feb 20, 2013 -
Re: Assassin and Cannibal
'Sup, Prey109? I'll start with some positives. You've got an intriguing idea here, and this kind of ravaged-world, dystopian stuff never gets old as long as you put your own ...
Feb 20, 2013 -
Re: Austin Ashford
Hi, TheWorldIsMyLife. You said you needed quick reviews, so here I am. This piece was...interesting, I have to say. The idea was fairly engaging, and I like how dark it ...
Feb 16, 2013 -
Re: Icarus
Hey, ElJoker, review time. Well, first things first, this was certainly interesting. The idea of utopia and dystopia was an engaging concept, and the way it was so contrasting and ...
Feb 16, 2013 -
Re: PewdieCry-Will you be there?
Heya, LoveMyLifeNOT, how about a review? Don't worry, as a fellow Pewdie-fan and generally lovely-jubbly person, I'll try and not be too harsh. So, here we go: Okay, I'm not ...
Feb 15, 2013 -
Re: Elder - Chapter 1
Hello, Dakota. How about a review? Firstly, I think this is generally a great start to the story. It's got drama, a mix of characters, and has set up a ...
Feb 15, 2013 -
Re: The Green Room - Prologue
Hey there, omniyus. Just popping in for a little review. Firstly, the good. You've managed to capture a good portion of excitement and emotion in this first passage, and your ...
Feb 12, 2013 -
Re: Amour
Hello, Staarryskyy. Nice name. XD Anyway, in terms of this poem...I don't know. Admittedly, I'm not a poet, and I think that it's hard to please everyone with poems seeing ...
Jan 27, 2013 -
Re: Nothing's Fair in Love and War
Hey, Lydvarn. I know this piece is quite old, but how about a review? Better late than never, right? Firstly, I really really liked this. Very neat, very precise; it ...
Jan 27, 2013
