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  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Super group!

    Heya, mvb. Time for a quick review. :) I'm not going to beat around the bush telling you everything that's already been said - I'm sure that you know by ...

    Feb 24, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Action / Adventure Re: Remember?

    Heya, ReisePiecey. I'm just popping in for a short review seeing as reason seems to have covered a great deal of what needs to be said. Anyway, first of all, ...

    Feb 24, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Fanfiction Re: The Shadow's Light - Ch. 1

    Hey, spiritwolf1011. This story isn't bad, I'll tell you now. In terms of the way you wrote it - punctuation, spelling, all that stuff - it was great. I didn't ...

    Feb 24, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Dramatic Re: FREAK - Chapter 4

    I'm really caught up in this. Your writing is so simple and to the point, its like something that you can just drink in gallons. There's none of this crushing ...

    Feb 24, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Dramatic Re: High school: We Know DRAMA (Chapter 1)

    Right, Inverted Clock. Here's my first review of the day. Okay, there's some good in here - you've made a grounded start, you've got some good characters, you've set the ...

    Feb 24, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Realistic Re: The Ones Who Understand: Chapter 1

    Hi, Little Caroleen. This is a good beginning to your story, and I'm actually rather enjoying it. I like how fresh and simple your writing style is, and the way ...

    Feb 20, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Where?

    Hey, Shiny. Well, this poem's not bad, I'll say it now - it certainly gets better as it goes along. I'm no poet, so there's probably a lot of aspects ...

    Feb 20, 2013
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Assassin and Cannibal

    'Sup, Prey109? I'll start with some positives. You've got an intriguing idea here, and this kind of ravaged-world, dystopian stuff never gets old as long as you put your own ...

    Feb 20, 2013
  • Short Story » Supernatural, General Re: Austin Ashford

    Hi, TheWorldIsMyLife. You said you needed quick reviews, so here I am. This piece was...interesting, I have to say. The idea was fairly engaging, and I like how dark it ...

    Feb 16, 2013
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: Icarus

    Hey, ElJoker, review time. Well, first things first, this was certainly interesting. The idea of utopia and dystopia was an engaging concept, and the way it was so contrasting and ...

    Feb 16, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Fanfiction Re: PewdieCry-Will you be there?

    Heya, LoveMyLifeNOT, how about a review? Don't worry, as a fellow Pewdie-fan and generally lovely-jubbly person, I'll try and not be too harsh. So, here we go: Okay, I'm not ...

    Feb 15, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Spiritual Re: Elder - Chapter 1

    Hello, Dakota. How about a review? Firstly, I think this is generally a great start to the story. It's got drama, a mix of characters, and has set up a ...

    Feb 15, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Satire Re: The Green Room - Prologue

    Hey there, omniyus. Just popping in for a little review. Firstly, the good. You've managed to capture a good portion of excitement and emotion in this first passage, and your ...

    Feb 12, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Amour

    Hello, Staarryskyy. Nice name. XD Anyway, in terms of this poem...I don't know. Admittedly, I'm not a poet, and I think that it's hard to please everyone with poems seeing ...

    Jan 27, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: Nothing's Fair in Love and War

    Hey, Lydvarn. I know this piece is quite old, but how about a review? Better late than never, right? Firstly, I really really liked this. Very neat, very precise; it ...

    Jan 27, 2013


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