Panikos

Hi, Dragon. I thought I'd have a shot at reviewing a bit of your poetry. It's not my usual haunt, but I've had a bit of experience writing sonnets so ...

Hi, Tikki. Pan here to fry up a review for you today. I am intrigued! When I first read the synopsis of this chapter, I assumed that it was more ...

Hi, Dragon. I like that this chapter is calmer - it's just what the reader needs after the drama of chapter ten. I'm glad to see that you're using the ...

Hi, Sassafras. I promised a review and here I am! I've read your prologue even if I haven't reviewed it, but in my opinion this chapter makes for a much ...

Hiya, Joseph. I'm Pan, and I'll be frying up a review for you today. I love the set up of this piece. It's so ridiculous. You handle the humour really ...

Hi, Dragon. Sorry for the delay! This chapter has a lot of strengths. There's a good amount of humour and your prose style remains solid. You get in a bit ...

Hi, Dragon! This is definitely the best chapter yet in my opinion. We're finally seeing the plot shift towards Crystall, which I'm glad of, and the fact that it's wrapped ...

Hi, Skywind555. Pan here to fry up a review for this almighty piece. The first thing I'd recommend would be to post in smaller chunks in future. While I'm not ...

Hi, Dragon. I've been checking YWS religiously waiting for this chapter, so I'm glad it's finally here! I just went back and had a brief look over the first chapter ...

Hi, Dragon! Back again to review chapter five. I'll start by saying that I was glad to see you addressing Katrina's lack of emotion in this chapter. It's a good ...

Hi, Dragon! I'm back from my holiday and jetlagged to hell and back, but I still want to get on with reviewing this chapter. Nice to see another chapter which ...

Hi, Dragon! Back again for another review. Okie-dokie! Overall impressions. This is definitely a good chapter for getting to know Katrina, though I definitely don't feel like she's being characterised

Hi, kman134! Back again to fry up another review. I've been meaning to review this for a few days but I've only just got round to it. Reading this chapter, ...

Hi, Dragon. Back again to review, as promised. Ahh, I feel like I've been waiting for a chapter like this. It's much more low-key than the others, but that's what ...

Hi, Dragon. Back again to review. I liked the calmness of this chapter. It's nice to see the characters interacting and having a bit of breathing room, and I enjoyed ...