Panikos

Hi, LadyLizzLovelace. I'm Pan and I'll be frying up a revoew for you today. Let's dive straight into it. Nitpicks “Have you seen the well to do, up and down ...

Hi, birk! I'm Pan and I'll be reviewing your work today. Let's get straight to it! Nitpicks She sat there, beside her closest friend, head resting on her shoulder, their ...

Hi, Lightsong! Pan here to review. Sorry it's taken so long; I've been either on holiday or busy with my own writing. Another enjoyable chapter, but more about that later. ...

Hi, Kostia! I'm Pan and I'll be reviewing your work today. All of the other reviewers have cleared up the grammar nitpicks pretty well. I'll just point out one or ...

Hi, RainaDee. Pan here for a quick review. I like the sentiment of the poem. It's an admirable ambition to have and I'm sure many people on this site can ...

Hi! Pan here for a short review. I don't really have any nitpicks, apart from this teeny tiny minor one: I remember when she told me how her mother stumbled ...

Hi, Lightsong. Pan back to review. I'm trying to get quicker at critiquing so I'll jump straight into the nitpicks. Nitpicks Gael moved from one shelf to another. It didn’t ...

Hi, TheLeakyPen. Pan here to review. I have read the first chapter so I am up to date with the whole story. I've got a few tiny nitpicks, but not ...

Hi, JustPerks! Pan here to review. I'm sort of in two minds about this piece. I've never been a massive fan of teen fiction, so I do apologise if this ...

Hi, Holysocks. As promised, I'm here to review. First things first - I really like this. Whereas in part one the intrigue mostly comes from not understanding what's going in, ...

Hi, DragonWriter22. Pan dropping in for a quick review. I don't critique poetry very often, but yours captured my interest. I like the simplicity of the language and the alliterative ...

Hi, Lightsong. Pan back again to review. In-ter-esting. I feel like a lot of things are starting to come together. The connections between the different POV characters are steadily building ...

Hi, MJ. Pan dropping in to review. As an opening, I think this is pretty strong. Amnesiac protagonists are inherently interesting, so you hooked me in almost instantly. The only ...

Hi, Lightsong. Back again to review. I really enjoyed this section. Even though Ilami is the main character, I think I find chapters from other characters' perspectives a bit more ...

Hi, Lightsong. I'm back with a working computer and ready to catch up on reviews. Can't believe how far behind I am again! I'll start by saying that the story ...