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Re: Earth Descended: 1.06
Hiya Vent! Happy Review Day! Small Comments They curve and bend in abstract shapes, but they piece together in ways that look like writing. In fact, if Ming looks closely ...
Oct 27, 2019 -
Re: Earth Descended: 1.05
Heya, Vent! Before we get started, I just want to say that I absolutely loved this chapter. It's definitely my favourite one so far. Small Comments The undead fish flap ...
Oct 21, 2019 -
Re: Assignment: Rebirth Chapter 2.1
Hey Tuck! Back again to review. Small Comments their hands clasped behind their backs and the latest communication technology clipped onto their belts What do you mean by this, exactly? ...
Oct 18, 2019 -
Re: Assignment: Rebirth 1.3
Hiya, Tuckster! Just dropping in to catch up on this. Can you tag me in future instalments? I want to keep on top of reviewing them! Small Comments Rae's posture ...
Oct 17, 2019 -
Re: Earth Descended: 1.04
Hiya Vent! Sorry it's taken a few days for me to get to this. Small Comments Instinctively, she tightens her grip on her backpack straps. “Hello?” she calls. If Ming ...
Oct 16, 2019 -
Re: Assignment: Rebirth 1.2
Hiya, Tuck! I thought I'd drop in for a quick review. I've read the first part of this chapter even if I haven't reviewed it, so I'm up to speed. ...
Oct 9, 2019 -
Re: Earth Descended: 1.03
Hiya, Vent! Back again for another review. This one will be shorter, because I don't think I have quite as much to say. Was it an enjoyable chapter? Yes, undoubtedly. ...
Oct 8, 2019 -
Re: Earth Descended: 1.02
Hiya, Vent! I thought I'd drop in and check out your LMS, after you left such a lovely review on mine. I've read the first chapter so I'm up to ...
Oct 7, 2019 -
Re: Fallen Shields: Chapter Two: The answer
Hiya again, Mem! I thought I'd drop in again to review the next bit. I definitely liked this better than the first chapter, because I found it much easier to ...
Sep 29, 2019 -
Re: Fallen Shields: Chapter One: Hands of the throne
Hiya, Mem! Thought I'd drop in for a quick review. Small Comments He felt the bones of it beneath his war-scarred hands, muscles knotted under the stresses of the day. ...
Sep 28, 2019 -
Re: Fireheart: 1
Hiya, Omnom! I thought I'd drop in for a quick review. I'm going to start with the critiques, just to get them out of the way. I'm not going to ...
Sep 27, 2019 -
Re: Lies
Hi, Tawsif! You asked for an honest review, so here I am. I'm going to start with the criticisms, just to get the negatives out of the way. The first ...
Sep 26, 2019 -
Re: A Lot Like Christmas: Chapter Four
Hiya, Sasha! Can I call you Sasha? I said I'd swing by for a review and here I am. This was a lovely read, as always. It felt like we ...
Sep 25, 2019 -
Re: The Limitations of a Mechanical Heart- Chapter One
Hiya, mayarose823! Just dropping in for a quick review. Rather like Tuckster, I think this opening is a diamond in the rough. I really love your opening sentence - it's ...
Sep 30, 2019 -
Re: Children with Stars in their Veins (Prologue)
Hi Mellifera! I'm writing this review on mobile so apologies in advance for typos. On the whole, I enjoyed this. It's an intriguing start, and I feel like the prologue ...
Sep 24, 2019
