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Re: Books
I whole heartedly agree with your poem. Books do everything you say and so much more. I can really relate to this poem because this is how books are for ...
Sun Jun 17, 2012 5:46 pm -
Re: deleted
I really really like these lyrics. I would love to actually hear the music put to this song. Your lyrics strike the emotions and can be very relatable to many ...
Sun Jun 17, 2012 5:31 pm -
Re: Citrus Sky (Sunset Melody)
Ahh these are great lyrics. I can hear a melody to these lyrics already. : ) I would love to hear this on the radio or something sometime. : ) ...
Fri Jun 15, 2012 3:05 pm -
Re: La Curandera's Instructions: Act 2
This is really quite interesting. It feels very magical. I can see this being a poem big time. : ) Ahhh the beginning is so descriptive in the comparison of ...
Fri Jun 15, 2012 2:58 pm -
Re: Butterfly
This poem is so beautiful and so sad. The great thing about this poem is that a lot of people can relate to the bullying that she went through. You ...
Fri Jun 15, 2012 2:50 pm -
Re: It Will Hurt
This poem is very deep. I can feel the speakers pain. The pain in this poem is properly and well portrayed. Very good with this poem. I really like it. ...
Fri Jun 15, 2012 1:11 am -
Re: My Gift To You
Hi there, I enjoyed your poem. : ) There is a lot of love in this poem. And I am such a sucker for love. A couple of things. The ...
Fri Jun 15, 2012 12:54 am -
Re: Andromeda
I really enjoy the allusion. This poem has such a deep meaning to it also. Very well done. I do not quite grasp the structure of the poem, but that ...
Thu Jun 14, 2012 3:11 am -
Re: Jane
This is really cool. : ) I like the thought you put into it and reminds me of a combo of Tim Burton and Edgar Allen Poe. The meter it ...
Thu Jun 14, 2012 2:57 am -
Re: Lilly
I had a dog named Lilly. This is such a beautiful heart felt poem. A perfect example of why we we can give a voice to our emotions and a ...
Wed Jun 13, 2012 3:17 am -
Re: Tainted Roses
Your poem is very beautiful and your figurative language is captivating. The figurative language in this poem is a parallel to the visualization. They go hand in hand yet opposite. ...
Mon Jun 11, 2012 10:16 pm
