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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Books

    I whole heartedly agree with your poem. Books do everything you say and so much more. I can really relate to this poem because this is how books are for ...

    Sun Jun 17, 2012 5:46 pm
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Realistic Re: deleted

    I really really like these lyrics. I would love to actually hear the music put to this song. Your lyrics strike the emotions and can be very relatable to many ...

    Sun Jun 17, 2012 5:31 pm
  • Lyrics » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Citrus Sky (Sunset Melody)

    Ahh these are great lyrics. I can hear a melody to these lyrics already. : ) I would love to hear this on the radio or something sometime. : ) ...

    Fri Jun 15, 2012 3:05 pm
  • Other » Mystery / Suspense, Spiritual Re: La Curandera's Instructions: Act 2

    This is really quite interesting. It feels very magical. I can see this being a poem big time. : ) Ahhh the beginning is so descriptive in the comparison of ...

    Fri Jun 15, 2012 2:58 pm
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Butterfly

    This poem is so beautiful and so sad. The great thing about this poem is that a lot of people can relate to the bullying that she went through. You ...

    Fri Jun 15, 2012 2:50 pm
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: It Will Hurt

    This poem is very deep. I can feel the speakers pain. The pain in this poem is properly and well portrayed. Very good with this poem. I really like it. ...

    Fri Jun 15, 2012 1:11 am
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: My Gift To You

    Hi there, I enjoyed your poem. : ) There is a lot of love in this poem. And I am such a sucker for love. A couple of things. The ...

    Fri Jun 15, 2012 12:54 am
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Andromeda

    I really enjoy the allusion. This poem has such a deep meaning to it also. Very well done. I do not quite grasp the structure of the poem, but that ...

    Thu Jun 14, 2012 3:11 am
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Jane

    This is really cool. : ) I like the thought you put into it and reminds me of a combo of Tim Burton and Edgar Allen Poe. The meter it ...

    Thu Jun 14, 2012 2:57 am
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Lilly

    I had a dog named Lilly. This is such a beautiful heart felt poem. A perfect example of why we we can give a voice to our emotions and a ...

    Wed Jun 13, 2012 3:17 am
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: Tainted Roses

    Your poem is very beautiful and your figurative language is captivating. The figurative language in this poem is a parallel to the visualization. They go hand in hand yet opposite. ...

    Mon Jun 11, 2012 10:16 pm


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