PandaRawr

First I will say Jar of Hearts is one of my favorite songs, and I love what you did with it. The whole thing from the friends POV made this ...

I completely loved this. The fact that through the whole story he seemed a little crazy just adds to the greatness of it. I think though that even though this ...

I'm not sure I understood the point of this. I understnad that Parker is an outcast, that he is misunderstood. I understand that Grover, his little brother, is the only ...

Okay, the first half of this that was talking about how you couldn't write a letter to an old friend confused me because you seemed to do it so well. ...

Wow. I really loved this. Maybe more than anything I've ever read. Right now I am tearing up. It's like I wrote this. I swear by the skies above that ...

Well first point. Do you plan to continue this, or is the end? If it is it seemed kind of pointless. It was funny, but didn't have a conflict or ...

I love that this was not cliche. The "narrator" we shall called it, noted that it was dry with other people (which I'm gaining can also be used as a ...

This was short but I think its for the best. Lots of long poems lose meaning with length. they dtrech words and bend them trying to one more line onto ...

Okay this was interesting to a degree. There was just a hint of anything intersting happening and that's why I kept reading. onestly if I had known how you were ...

Wow. This is really good. I am thouroughly enjoying this story. I did find some grammer mistakes but nothing note worthy. I love what your doing with Hades. If I'm ...

Hi there! I loved what you were doing with this and appreciate your help to raise awarness. First I do NOT comment on commas, I tend to stay away from ...

One thing I'll point out. I never ever post on grammer or spelling unless it is just plain stupid and someone hasn't already. Truthfully I don't even look for it. ...

Wow, I can relate to almost ever line of this. Especially the parts refering to be a sore loser because I can't stand being wrong! this was a good insight, ...

When I read this it seemed real. I put two and two together with MattLangg and dear Matthew. I think the fact that the letter was to yourself was the ...

This is interesting. I wasn't sure the message you were trying to send here, but it was written well. I loved it for some odd reason. I enjoyed it of ...