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Very very nice, i did not really feel the "Meaning" of this though, it hit me afterward. but not right at the first sentience, witch is what you want, so ...

Hello Aady! i see you have written a nice little peace. i find this peace quite nice, i did notice that in the description you said "Do you want to ...

just a little grammar, thats all.... The needle, you drove in, and threaded through my heart. just two lonely commas that you forgot in your brain... like i said.just some ...

hello Secrete! I Enjoyed myself reading this Poem... I see all the emotion that went into this. I myself, would not have put ''It lifts me up from down to ...

Childish desire as they beat on doors begging "Please, just one more." {a few} hours worth of pain that they mistake for fun and games. i think this poem is ...

Stand tall and hold strong, my love. Wear hot pink and thrust your fist to the sky, my love. {your first what??} Have sharp tongue and {a} quick slap to ...

Last night in [my] -a- dream, {who's dream? you'rs? XD} I saw my beloved [mom] -mum- coming back to life. {mom?} We kissed and we hugged and we cried [until] ...

Night o' night a dark creature at night, your light seems to -be- fade {no 'be'} as the sun {is} just gone and leaving this street in coldness. You see ...

i will put [[hi]] around what i am talking about and i will put {{hi}} were i am adding some thing to your work, and i will put -hi- if ...

i thank it is a little short so you don't really "see" it if you know what i mean, i do not understand this part "and when it takes and ...

OM GOSH!! its so cool!! but a have some qwstshons : 1)The creature sat back on its long legs>>i dont think that ANY anamulls sit on thar lages. i undr ...

it vare drmatik. the "caught in the wind on the stormy sea." prt was a little confusing...i think that it wood have been beadier if you had don som thin ...