PancakeandWaffle

Hi this is Pancake here and may I just say that this sounds really good! I love the way you spoke of the fables (or realities) of the village and ...

Hi this is Pancake here, and can I just say that the way you made your characters talked reminded my of "Of Mice and Men" (which is a really good ...

Hello! Waffle here to review your work. Before warned, anything I "correct" you on is just my opinion, and I respect that it is your poem, not mine. It had ...

I understand this type of feeling. I had a friend that was new in my school. All the other girls were already satisfied with their friends, so they pretty much ...

Hello! Waffle here to review your work. I had a very, very hard time understanding this. I did like the idea. Maybe this would have been a better short story, ...

Hello! I do wish this had a better layout, especially for a poem. PLEASE capitalize!!! i've got my heart tangled up in country songs I've* [baby i promise when i'm ...

Hello! Waffle here to review your work. I can see what you are getting at. It flows nicely, It's the right size, and overall It's good. The thick blue coast ...

XD that ending, tho! Hello! I am Waffle here to review your work! Let's see... I am so sad that this doesn't flow well :/ I wish it did! This ...

First off, this was quite funny. I would have chosen a different title though, even though it is "proving" you aren't particularly good at poetry. "Once in a while, I ...

"What could go wrong?" Biggest understatement of the twenty-first century. Oh, the cliff hangers. Moving on, the way you wrote this was constantly leaving me in curiosity (not in a ...

"The world is filled with everything we hate" -Love the image! Perks: Reality. "The only thing we get for suffering is hope." I can't quite follow this line.. "Hope is ...

Wow, woman you are breaking and re-building my heart with your little stories! This was a very emotional read, but like the person below me said "The teary-eyed effect it ...

Wow, this is really good! I loved how you dug under the exterior of a person (like with the bullies) to find their center, what they truly are feeling underneath. ...

Hey hey Sophie~ It's Pancake and I just have to say that was so sweet! You're really progressing, but as you know already there were some grammatical errors but everyone ...

There is something about your writing that pulls apart the uglieness of a human and lays it out flat on a table, then places it together to form a perfect ...