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THANKS. And I will, makes more sense that way. C:

How's that?

Awh! Thanks! I actually don't think that part is any good. I'll go back and fix it when I have time.

This is great! I like the plot, and I didn't see any problems with the grammar, but is it just one chapter? I mean, I really like it, anyways Cx ...

Thanks, Lulu ^^ I'm glad that there are only two thing that are wrong, and I will change them ASAP. I will be continuing it though!

Actually, I re-read it. I never said it was a wardrobe D: Just a room..

I was kind of testing myself. I usually drop the profile all at once, but I had just read Rydia's article, and I tried it out Cx Thanks for the ...

Over to the right when you view the work, it should say 'Edit Work,' though you might have to scroll a bit ^^

Sure. ^^

I was thinking about making it longer, but the plot contains her escaping, then leads straight into a storybook. Kind of like a prequel? Thanks for the comment!

You're welcome, by the way. I fixed it up, thanks for the credit. Just kidding.

Kaylee gives me no credit. I cleaned it up for her, and adjusted a few things. So thanks, Kayyy.

You're welcooomee~

Ah. Okay, then. Good job ^^

Trust me, I know the feeling all too well, but you're welcome ^^