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Re: The Witches of Flamina [Episode 1]
Hello friend! I saw your work in the Green Room and figured I’d check it out. On first impressions, this was a great script. It seemed to have a clear ...
Nov 15, 2023 -
Re: One Last Call
Hello, new member! Welcome to YWS! I saw your work in the Green Room and figured I'd check it out! On first impressions, I found this to be structured in ...
Nov 15, 2023 -
Re: Okay?
Hello friend! I saw your work in the Green Room and figured I’d check it out, and I'm sure glad I did! On first impressions, this was a very well-developed ...
Nov 14, 2023 -
Re: Lost to the Sea
Hello, new member! Welcome to YWS! I saw your work in the Green Room and figured I'd check it out! On first impressions, I noticed this was quite short and ...
Nov 14, 2023 -
Re: The strange sights of Riley Gretchen
Hello friend! I saw your work in the Green Room and figured I’d check it out, so here I am! On first impressions, this took me by surprise. I had ...
Nov 14, 2023 -
Re: Cyclical Hunger
Hello friend! I saw your work in the Green Room and figured I'd check it out. I would like to say, however, that poetry is not my strong suit. On ...
Nov 13, 2023 -
Re: Sardines for lunch
Hello friend! I saw your poem in the Green Room and figured I'd check it out, and I'm sure glad I did. I didn't know what to expect at first, ...
Nov 13, 2023 -
Re: Shadow's Rising Chapter 10 (V1)
Hello friend! I have to say I just jumped into this book, starting right here at Chapter 10, but nonetheless, I'm impressed. On first impressions, it really seemed like you ...
Nov 12, 2023 -
Re: Miss I.D.G.A.F. (Ch. 2)
Hello again! I'm happy to see you posted Chapter 2! I have to say that the direction this is going is very enticing. The way you started this chapter was ...
Nov 11, 2023 -
Re: Roulette
Hello friend! I know you posted this a little while ago, but I just stumbled on it and wanted to give my honest review. I've got to say, I was ...
Nov 11, 2023 -
Re: In the Lions Cage
Hello there, friend! I would like to start off by saying poems are not my specialty and I do not claim to know what I'm talking about, but that doesn't ...
Nov 11, 2023 -
Re: Wants to know Your Story—Part 2 (Violence Alert!)
Wow. Just wow. That took an exciting twist I was not expecting or prepared for. But it most definitely lived up to the expectations I garnered from Part 1, and ...
Nov 11, 2023 -
Re: Miss I.D.G.A.F.
Hello, new member! I, like you, have joined very recently. And with that, I've been trying to get around and get to know some people, so I'm writing you a ...
Nov 11, 2023 -
Re: Derek’s story-The adventures of Poppy McLain
Hello, friend! I am writing this review mainly to tell you that this was a wonderful short. The way you were able to make Derek's death so convoluted yet so ...
Nov 11, 2023 -
Re: Wants to Know Your Story—Part 1 (Violence Alert!)
Hello there! I am writing this to say this was a very good read, and the details were quite unblemished. However, I would say the verb tenses in some parts ...
Nov 10, 2023