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Painful to read? I thought this was beautiful. Now I want to go look at a tree just to see if I could ever come up with anything this great. ...

Wow... I really wrote that. .> I promise I really have improved from this. XD

Hello! So I loved this, I thought it was very cute. Though the rhythem was off in a few places that can be fixed with a little rewording. Good Luck ...

Sumi pretty much took the words out of my mouth, so I'll not repeat them. I will say this, try to read some poetry in your spare time. It will ...

I really like this a lot. It's hard to do something that is done so often and really make it your own, and you have done that here :)

I would tell the real terror of it, however, like I said. This really is my story, and I really don't remember much... I'm sorry :)

I don't mind you being comma happy, I think it actually somewhat works with your writing style. Though in some places it did get a bit daunting. Other than that ...

I like it, but then I tend to like things that delve into human nature and our more primal instincts. Also I tend to like things that are a little ...

I pretty much echo what was said above. I had a hard time keeping interest about half way through, and in a lot of ways it comes off quite creepy.

Thank you all for the reviews, this is actually almost an exact page from one of my diarys when I was younger. So yeah, this really did happen. I plan ...

I really love this. I love how you repeat the right words and phrases at the right time. Very well done indeed.

I like the revised version much better :)

I agree with the last post, I like it up until the last few lines where the word "true" seemed to be thrown into my face. Other than that I ...

Please don't put the title of the poem in all caps, it's against the rules and just harsh on the eyes. Other than that I am going to agree with ...

This poem did bring up memories, but the most disturbing aspects are how you captured this feeling of loss and disgust that comes with writing on yourself, piercings and the ...