I have a cat named Sammi.
Some people say she is as gentle as Bambi.
I for one disagree,
I think she has it out for me.
I woke with a fright in the middle of the night,
And saw little Sammi tearing the stuffing out of my sister’s Lamby.
I made a mistake and looked under the table,
She gave me a smile like in a scary fable.
I have finally learned to live with Sammi,
But I wonder, when will she get me?
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lol scary part is she actually did smile at me once... in fact she teleported on numerous occasions...not joking
Hello!
So I loved this, I thought it was very cute. Though the rhythem was off in a few places that can be fixed with a little rewording.
Good Luck
OverEasy
too true, your rhymes were off, but not that much, and the poem was odd... good though, so keep it.
Heh thats a creepy cat XD
Good poem though
well this is a wierd peom. But just because it is wierd doesn't mean it it bad. I really liked this.
This is the reason why I sleep with my door closed.