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Hello! First things first, if this is not your work, and I cannot tell because of the way that you have published who the author is and I don't know ...

This is beautiful my dear, and I am not saying that just because I am your friend either. The only one thing I would change is this little line here. ...

I like the first stanza except the very last line, it just seemed thrown in and didn't flow well with the rest of the verse. I do have to say ...

Penguin dear! This was rather good, I love the imaginary, and the way you put words together that don't seem like they make sense but somehow they do. Clots of ...

Hello! Just wanted to let you know that here on YWS we ask that you do two reviews before posting your work on here. Keeping a 2:1 ratio of reviews ...

Wow, I was going to go through line by line... but they are just all very cliche. You took an old idea, and put no spin on it at all. ...

I'm sorry this took me so long! Ok now onto the story. It was rather good! Time left in Arnold’s life: 10 days, 23 hours, and roughly 44 minutes. I ...

Hello! I just want to let you know that we ask that you do two reviews before posting your own work. We like to keep a 2:1 ratio of reviews ...

I see that he has obviously not capitalized his I's on purpose. I don't mind it at all, it gives it a sort of ee cummings feel. Which by the ...

[quote]Ok, I lied, I coudnt resist, But, hey, atleast I tried, It all went into the mist, I laughed, I cried,[b] cliche[/b] But lying was not on my list, the ...

First I have to tell you that you need to do two reviews before posting anything. The second thing I feel the urge to tell you is lose the color, ...

Seeing as this is the first poem I post here, I thought it'd be better, to keep it short and hopefully sweet. I'd appreciate some constructive criticism. Thanks! :) ECONOMICS ...

I am sorry to say that the Twilight series is one of my least favorite series that I have ever read. I disliked the plot, the description was dull, and ...

what fresh new hell has comes my way. Is there a reason the "what" is not capitalized? A one way trip - express - without delay. No sex, no love, ...

Do you remember the day our paths first crossed? Can you recall, at all, a faraway carousal waltz? I like this last line, it speaks volumes and I'm a big ...