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First Impressions The first stanza is interesting, the flow is lovely, in my opinion, but the meaning of it gets somewhat lost. I mean, I get it, I get what ...

First Impressions The first thing I felt after reading this was that it was lacking in actual feeling. Each line feels so emotionless and dry. With all of the "I ...

First Impressions I hate to be cruel, but for a poem titled "Unique" this certainly didn't stand up. The first thing I notice is how very flat it feels. Perhaps ...

Well, first I'd like to comment on the mispelling of the word "story" in your title. Might want to fix that ;) On the content, there isn't much here to ...

First Impressions Well the first issue with this poem, is that it feels like you wrote it in about two minutes. There is so little emotion behind it, and it ...

First Impressions Emotional poems tend to be a little more difficult to convey, and I can see that you've had issues with Imagry here. Understanding and creating effective Imagry when ...

Grammar, Punctuation, and Spelling I cringe at the lack of grammar and proper spelling in this piece. The first thing I suggest is that you touch up on your basics. ...

First Impressions The first thing that stands out (and not in a positive way) is the rhyme scheme. The first stanza feels so forced, specifically because of the rhyming going ...

First Impressions This poem is begging you to punctuate it properly , I mean... begging. A lot of people think that poetry does not need punctuation, but in short, it ...

First things that stand out The first thing I notice is your grammar, punctuation and spelling. In short, there are errors. Shortening words fits with the feel and vibe of ...

First Thoughts The first thing that stands out like a sore thumb is the rhyme scheme. The first thing about making poetry that rhymes is that it often sounds forced, ...

First Impressions Punctuation, punctuation, punctuation! This piece is screaming for editing and begging you to add proper punctuation to it. Just because this is poetry, does not mean you get ...

First Impressions I love the idea of comparing a love interest to chocolate, but you didn't make the metaphor work here. The layout is interesting, but the lack of Poetic ...

First Impressions Well first off, if you're using the lack of correct punctuation and capitalization as a literary technique, it's not working with this particular piece. I suggest perhaps going ...

First Impressions Well the flow was consistant, which is lovely, but some parts felt very very very forced. Even in poetry with rhyme you don't want it to sound like ...