OrionRising

As an Ode I think it makes sense that everything in the poem refers to the title. That's typically how Odes work. This poem is meant to be presented with ...

I think my poem does make sense. Of course, explaining a poem should not be necessary but I believe you're overlooking pretty obvious ideas. Firstly, this is a poem speaking ...

Thanks for the review! I made a slight typo when typing this from my hand-written version. Gluttonous was only supposed to be there once. The other word was Glutinous (gluten-filled). ...

Hi! I enjoyed your poem to an extent. It definitely oozes with potential yet in general I feel a sort of disinterest due to the lack of personal detail. It ...

Pretty good poem. Is it supposed to be a song? I read the first line and though maybe that was spoken and then the rest was sung but I couldn't ...

To clear things up, this poem came as a memory of me, as a child, always wanting to go see the live Lobsters which were kept in a small tank ...

Your poem is obviously based around this phrase, "Cringe, singe/Searing, fearing/Burning, loathing." Many of these words are vague due to their broadness. Loathing, for example, is a broad subject. I ...

True, but honestly, I think it might have just been an error on your part. Everyone else seemed to understand it fine. If multiple people found the first two lines ...

First of all, it is supposed to be one big chunk. Its a stylistic choice which I believe, since this poem is a little bit of a rant, gives the ...

Hey guys! Thanks for the reviews!!! I'll post another piece soon! Any more reviews would be greatly appreciated. I will even review one of your pieces if you review mine!

Hey guys! Thanks for the reviews!!! I'll post another piece soon! Any more reviews would be greatly appreciated. I will even review one of your pieces if you review mine!

For all you dawgs out there, I translated this lifechanging work for you.

The only reason the dashes are there is because when I was publishing it at first it would not let me post the blank spaces between lines. So I posted ...