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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Humor Re: Not My Circus: Chapter 1

    Hiya! This is Orabella here with a short review. I can't wait to see where this goes! So far this is really interesting, and after reading the blurb, I think ...

    Aug 14, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: The Passion Forest; Chapter 1 - Beneath Seas and Above Clouds

    Hiya! This is Orabella, here with a review. I like how this chapter gives a little background as to how the Passion Forest came to be, and also how it ...

    Aug 13, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Prologue - The Passion Forest

    Hiya! This is Orabella, here with a review. Oooh! So far, I'm loving this! This is like an even more intriguing version of Harry Potter, and I literally enjoyed every ...

    Aug 12, 2023
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: these hands of mine

    Hi! This is Orabella, here to give you a short review. I love the last lines: are not supposed to die even when they do. This tells me some one/people ...

    Aug 12, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Fossilized Remembrance: Chapter Seven

    Hello! This is Orabella, here with a review. Oooh, and now they know. This is getting more and more interesting by the minute. At this point, I'm guessing they want ...

    Aug 10, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Film Re: Many Perspectives (s1, ep3)

    Hi! This is Orabella with a review. You sure like to write heartless characters, huh? People that don't care whether or not someone dies. First Wilbur's friends, and now Luna. ...

    Aug 9, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Supernatural Re: The curses of Wilbur 1.

    Hiya! This is a Story Bunny, here to review. I, unfortunately, have not heard your true story about an overnight trip. Do you think you could tell me it briefly? ...

    Aug 8, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Fossilized Remembrance: Chapter Six

    Hello! This is Orabella, here to review! Let me just scream for a little bit... I didn't really expect Dr. Bailey and Dr. Dennison to fight so much. I guess ...

    Aug 7, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Fossilized Remembrance: Chapter Five

    Hello! This is Orabella with a review to share. Okay, this got kinda dark. And by kinda dark, I mean extremely dark. This is freaking me out, more than most ...

    Aug 6, 2023
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: River

    Hi! This is Orabella, here with a review. I absolutely adore this poem! Although I've never had my heart broken (or even had a boyfriend or girlfriend of my own), ...

    Aug 5, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: Chosen Sidekick: Prologue [Old]

    Hello! This is Orabella, here with a review! ^^ This is a mix of both seriousness and hilarity, and I'm loving it! It draws on the typical elders huddled around ...

    Aug 5, 2023
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Narrative Re: She Lives Inside Me

    Hello! This is Orabella, here to review. First off, welcome to YWS! Hope you like it here! ^^ Right in the beginning, you effectively hook the readers (or at least ...

    Aug 4, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Fossilized Remembrance: Chapter Four

    Hiya! This is Orabella, here to leave you a review. A new chapter! Yay! You write these chapters so fast! I personally am incredibly slow, so it's nice when a ...

    Aug 3, 2023
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: Reclaimed from the Sea's Embrace

    Hi! This is Orabella, here to review. Welcome to YWS! I hope you'll like it here. We're glad to have you. I found this a to be a very sweet ...

    Aug 2, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Film Re: Many Perspectives (s1, ep2)

    Hiya! This is Orabella, here to review. Yay! Another episode! I'm afraid I don't have all that good of advice for ya, but I can try my best. First, a ...

    Jul 31, 2023


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