OptimismUnderRain

To add on to what Cario said, I think you should also Re-read your pieces before posting it, it would probably make you realize your silly mistakes. but on the ...

I LOVE this. 'nuff said. It's dark and bautiful. This is the kind of poems I thrive to read. I think it was written very nicely and flowed very well. ...

Wow! this piece is truely creative! It's so subliminal yet meaningful. I like it. I'd give them some, but daddy would forbid it. This part really shows how you have ...

Yeah I would slightly agree with Flyer, but I would say only try to find another word for either instead or blend, because that part does rhyme. Other than that ...

Hey, I like the over all thought of the piece, it's very creative. Just a few silly mistakes: If I was old enough , I would drink my sorrows away ...

I like this little thought of yours. I ask myself that same question a lot to. I think everyone does In my opinion death is just your retirement from life. ...

I Loved this poem. It's absolutely brilliant. I can feel you're emotions and all the thoughts that you've had on this journey; and that ( in my opinion) is how ...

Hello, this is really a cool iambic pentameter. It's a little sad, but its understandable... it's something we can all relate to. I found one mistake though: The line "Wishing ...

Ireally like this. It deeply shows how growing up is rough. I can easily connect with this, and I'm sure almost everyone here can too. I really like how there's ...

D Singer, this is amazing. I love everything about it, especially you're structure. I love the single word lines. It says so much in such little. I adore this structure. ...

Wow, I really liked this piece. It had really good structure. There were a couple silly mistakes you made though: spelling, grammar, capitalization... no biggies though. also Why did i ...

Hey Juju, This story is quite interesting. It definitely kept me on my toes. The end was unexpected; but I agree with BornToShop. When you write my mom woke me ...

I liked it. I agree with ^ with grammer, but other than that, I like it. to me, it ties together very well.I also liked how you used different aspects ...