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I love this poem, and I'm not a fan of poems! Great job.

This story is very good. The only thing that worried me was that you mixed up "vibrosword" with "virbosword" I have a feeling vibrosword is what you meant to put, ...

I like what you did with this, I guess you fixed all the gramatical errors. So to go onto to the story: Really suspensful, and you left a lot of ...

Ok, since I owe you a review, I went to this one, for it was all I could find. To start off, the story is more of a romantic one ...

Here to review :D My work and comments will be in bold. Guards walked on either side of the prisoner in the dark, gloomy, wide hallway. The king watched from ...

I like this story. It really put in some great perspective that is totally new but original. There are some grammatical errors though. quite breaths I think that was supposed ...

Okay, here to review! I liked the beginning of the story, but after that it went way too fast for my liking. I didn't really like it that much. You ...

Ok, here to review! :D I like the story very much, but there are some things I saw that worried me. During the first few paragraphs, you changed you mind ...

For once, I don't have much to say about this. I don't know if it is because this is so good or so bad. It's kinda hard to tell right ...

I really like this story, although I haven't read chapters 1-7 (lol total spoiler on my part) but from what I can see of this new character, she has a ...

Here to review! Ok, first of all, I love this story, and I can tell it is going to be good. There are some parts that troubled me though. 1. ...

I love this story, absolutely love it. I have nothing to say but "wow" I like how you started it as a sort of flashback and then put it to ...

I really lover Harry Potter, so I can tell you some of my opinions. I kinda thought that you just replaced Harry's name with Neville and Ron's name with Harry ...

Here to review for you :) I don't know what to say about these paragraphs. I can't say that I was pulled in at the very beginning. It just seemed ...

I have never heard such details, it really grabbed my attention from the beginning. I like how you described the main character and his situation enough for the reader to ...