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Heyo shima! I'm a bit rusty, but let's dive right in. First of all, this would be much more believable if you set up the beginning as an actual letter ...

Hey there MeatBunCat! Let's dive right in. Now, I don't normally review random chapters (because I haven't read the entire story, y'know! But I noticed the Author's Note at the ...

Hey there Siren :D let's dive right in. Right off the bat, this reminds me of some lyrics from a Lorde song, "I'm a princess cut from marble, smoother than ...

Hey there Tulip! Let's dive right in. I haven't read Chapter 1 yet, so apologies if anything I say is explained through reading it. “Wake up,” a voice whispered into ...

Hey there Scar. Let's dive right in. Usual stuff applies. :D Eric had been hoping for a quiet night in while his boyfriend tried to find out what was wrong ...

Hey Scar! Let's dive right in. I have almost caught up! Yay. All previous critiques apply here blah blah blah you get the gist now. :D The address on the ...

Heyo Scar! Let's dive right in. As always, earlier critiques still apply here, and I'm mainly focusing on character and plot. Eric and he had agreed on one thing before ...

Hey there tigeraye! First of all, thank you for requesting a review in my thread, it means a lot! Let's dive right in. Cold snow blanketed the small and wintery ...

Hey there Scar. Let's jump in. Just as a quick reminder, I'm looking more on inconsistencies, both character and plot wise. Any nitpicks will largely be ignored; that stuff is ...

Hey Scar! Let's dive right in. As a reminder, I'm going into this under the perspective of "what's now a plot hole, what can be changed to have the story ...

Hey Scar! Let's dive right in. I'm going to be going through this through the lenses of what is now a plot hole since chapter 1 has changed so dramatically ...

Heyo Scar, once again. Let's dive right in. Chase picked it up, turning it over. There was a single word on the front cover, written in gold. Diary. Chase picked ...

Hey there passenger! Let's jump right in! When Mrs. Kalick does roll call, she pronounces my name like ‘tram’, except with an S in front. I’m here to inform everybody ...

Hey there NicolMemo! I don't normally review much poetry, but I will give it my best show. Let's jump right in. Right off the bat, the first poem isn't actually ...

Hey there Biluata! Let's jump right in! Her hands shook slightly as she touched the cap of the orange bottle that rattled with prescription pills. Beware the use of adverbs! ...