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I'm back! Ready to rock on roll and find out more about this world you've created. :) Again, I will review as I read so that I don't get my ...

Hello! Me again :) I've been interested, as you know, to read this for a long time! I'll write my review as I go so you get it step by ...

Hello there :) Here to review your work for review day! I was scrolling through the many different genres and this caught my eye. I, myself, have never read a ...

Me again :) I really love the x men so I'm already excited to read this. I don't think people do nearly enough fan fiction writing on here! I hope ...

Wow! I'm glad the system chose me to be your secret santa :) I really love this idea..its unique to anything that I've read on here before and its exciting ...

I found this to be very original and unique. Just the other day, my friend was worrying about the effects of her mirror falling off the wall and smashing!! I ...

Hey there! Writing to you in the hope I can help...even if a little. I'm confused as to what this is about! I feel as though I have missed something ...

Oh wow, I'm most definitely interested in who this mystery man could be! I want to know everything about their past together. I like the relationship that you've displayed between ...

This is a really original idea! I like the imagery that you have used. I would have liked to have delved deeper into what the husband and wife would have ...

Hi there! I think you have done a beautiful job here. These could be any two people in the entire world because you only described their eyes. Two men, two ...

Evening! Here to help hopefully. First of all I don't understand the connection between the title and the actual poem. It doesn't Relate for me. I would have called it ...

Evening Bella :) I think there's a great amount of potential here! I'm already interested in your protagonist and how she'll react to more strange things that are thrown at ...

Good Evening :) I am here to review and hopefully help! I think this has huge potential. I think it's an unique idea and you could take it to so ...

Haha I loved this! It's so original, quirky and really quite endearing! :) I've never read a script on here before so I thought I would give it a go ...

Hello there! Here to review and hopefully help. I'm not really a fan of poetry or a writer of it so I can't really help you with the technical side ...