OceanGirl

Heyy Fortis! First of all, The title was a bit catchy. Its short, tiny xD , crisp and the point was clear! Even when its short I knew that there ...

Welcome! Waiting for the next one! Ekk!

Ahh I dint help you a lot! Anyway you're welcome!

welcome!

Yes I write stories and currently I am working on a book.

welcome!

Sure. I will be very happy to read this furthur.

Thank you Rydia! I am glad that you remembered. I will surely change my mistakes!

Thanks for the review yeah about the problems that is confusion for all the reviewers.

Thanks for the review! But anyway as i mentioned that poetry is not my cup of tea so yeah... Its fine.

Awww... its so sweet!!! I loved the last part of the poem and the rhyming part was perfect. there are no other flaws other than what @Pickle mentioned. anyway, Good ...

Its an amazing piece! I totally enjoyed reading this poem and the flow of the poem is good and the vocabulary used is again good! the beginning of the poem ...

hmmmm..... the only thing is the format but its fine since you have already mentioned. the flow of the poem is pretty good I liked the rhyming and the poem ...

hmmmm..... the only thing is the format but its fine since you have already mentioned. the flow of the poem is pretty good I liked the rhyming and the poem ...

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this poem!!! the starting of the poem was good. the thing that attracts the readers is the rhyming part. Its an amazing piece! Good work!