Nymeria

Wow, that was something. I enjoyed reading this, the mystery flowed and kept me going perfectly. I don't think any parts were to vague or obvious. I guess the beginning ...

Wow. Okay. Here we go. That was intense. It was scary, confusing, and sad. It pulled at my emotions and reminded me a bit of the movie Love is All ...

The title had me believe that this would be an eerie story, and I was not disappointed. I enjoyed reading this; it was short and sweet. One of my favorite ...

Hi Trelose, I'm Nymeria. I'd like to give a review for this lovely work. I love the rhyming. I know poems don't have to rhyme, but I always love it ...

Hi, I'm Nymeria here for a review! You have beautiful word choice and I really like the ideas of this poem. I love how the last line is so simple ...

Hey, it's Nymeria for a review! First off, I absolutely loved it. The ending was especially good, giving that shimmer of hope even though we readers don't know for sure ...

You have such a beautiful idea here. I haven't seen anything from a mother's point of view on this site yet which is unfortunate because it is such an important ...

Now that's a story that draws you in! I have to say I don't usually read novels with a very strong romance spotlight, but this pretty catchy. Both chapters left ...

Now, that's a crazy story! And I mean that mostly in a good way. The story jumps right in and jumps right out, and that can certainly be a good ...

Hi Nathan, I really enjoyed the feels of your poem. The one thing that bugs me is all the commas. I would suggest removing all of the commas at the ...

Hello Vivian, ready for a fast review? First of all, I enjoyed reading this. A little girl, plants and animals, a magical kingdom-- sounds like my kind of thing. Yes, ...

That was weird, I'm not gonna lie. Weird, but not bad exactly. Your language is cool, there are some good ideas in there, but the story is confusing. There isn't ...

You have a sweet story, though I do agree with everything Lumos said. While there does need to be some point or theme of a short story, you've made yours ...

I love the rhyme scheme you have going! The one thing that really bugs me is that it should probably be 'speak' instead of 'spoke' in the second line. Other ...

You have some great ideas going! Something you might work on is sentence structure. Some parts are rather choppy The man's voice, weaved with magic"; 'weaved' should be 'woven'. The ...