Nutty

Nice. Just want to hear the tune now. *gasps* Isnt this like... the ONLY thing you've posted?

Oh... what can I say? That was extremely well written... I felt the change of mood as though I was there myself... It was creepy, but in a good way, ...

*claps* excellent! I love it. dark, cruel... heheheh I don't have time for looking for grammar and spelling. I want more! *pokes* hurry up with the next bit!

Controversial... excellent! Good twist in the story... keep posting so I have to catch up all over again lol

I love rogues..... lol! Quinn is great. very nice.

Boring??? You have to be joking. Every girls dream... to be selected by the cutest guy in school. Well written, realistic and interesting. Keep posting- I want to know more

I love it. No really, I do. You see the life as, indeed, an osprey would see it, if they just didnt think 000000000. I couldn't see any grammar problems, ...

don't let sentences ramble... lol

Liz.... something happy?? :o You know I agree totally. Except my brain can be scary too....

ah man.... (sighs) Addicted again...

oh man... now I want to go read ALL of ch..... I'll wait till it's published, shall I? :wink: Well, I'm gonna keep reading anyway...

Werewolves are cool... especially if you want to go more fantasy style. Yeah, I suppose it is scary... but not a whole lot phases me. Well written though. On to ...

good description, Just watch your emphasis and comma use. Interesting... I'll keep an eye out for more :wink:

handsome... not hansome.

elvin maiden... this is the first version. It is now called 'tamia's quest.' That version has been edited more. A lot of the phrasing is different, I'm trying to get ...