NovaRose

It's supposed to rhyme.

I loved the Redwall series, but I probably won't ever read them again. If I did, they probably wouldn't be as good since I've matured as a reader by a ...

Nate opened a can of worms with this one. And now the competition is fierce...

I like it, especially that no one gets hurt at the end. Those crazy stories where everyone dies and stuff are becoming unoriginal these days.

I read it as cow, too. The only part I don't understand is the reference to opals.

LMFAO. Doesn't Pop stand for popular music, though? I suppose the idea of punk rock is general to be counter-culture, though, so calling it popular music would be kind of ...

Beautiful.

Beautiful nuns are an injustice lol. Um... yeah.

Thanks, Q. I was pretty happy with this story. Probably not complete or cinched up too well, but definitely the best on-the-spot short story I've written.

I like it! A lot! Ieatworms pretty much covered the only part that didn't quite sound right. I love the ending.

LMAO. This is hilarious, in a morbid sort of way.

Cloud doesn't rhyme with down. How about "Today's Forecast" for the title?

There's nothing wrong with rhyming poems, only forced rhymes. Just thought I'd lay that down.

Ok. Well, its pretty good. Feels amateurish to me, but I'm not a big fan of poetry...

I don't quite understand it. Some guy is cutting and needs the other person's help, but I don't really understand the rest of it.