Published October 8, 2005
Mist and rain,
May bring pain
Thunder and lightning
May be frightening,
Sleet and frost
Is when i'll feel lost,
But when your here
The sun is near.
I'm not sure what i think of the poem. I'd like to hear anyone's views on it though. It'll be a great help if you've got any advice. Thank you.
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Really nice, I like it a lot. I like the fast pace...
I think Bobo's title is pretty good. Another one could be 'Fair Weather'.
Cloud doesn't rhyme with down.
How about "Today's Forecast" for the title?