I'LL KILL YOU IF YOU READ THIS.
The Nun I STRANGLED WITH MY BARE HANDS
Her name was Julia,
she loved motorcycles,
dreamed of making love
for the first time,
and she was beautiful,
was a temple of holiness, and
I
FUCKING STRANGLED HER WITH MY BARE FUCKING HANDS.
with all of that said, no. I'm not an emo kid. I'm not even particularly angry. And no, anger isn't my 'thing'. I just have a lifetime of witnessing injustice behind me and a lifetime of repressed anger. It's gone. I've submitted over twenty things to TYWS; maybe three showed anger. It's just that people were only attracted to the things that had pretty words like 'murder' and 'fuck you' in them. I want people to know that it's okay to scream FUCK YOU on the internet. It is. You have to release somewhere.
I also think that anger is funny. Hence this. It's a joke. Breathe.
-Psy
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You make me laugh.
Feel free to kill me...my life has no meaning anyway <sob!> ...but you have to find me first.
So there!
x x x
ok, thanks, I will.
I would have read it, if you didn't threaten to kill me. Now, I must hide in my bunker and fire Nukes at you.
Have a nice day.
I named her after I killed her.
Your title gave it away. I wasn't amused. It wasn't scandalous enough to be dramatic, and it was too predictable to be funny.
(PS. By the time she was a nun, she would have given up the name "Julia" )
Beautiful nuns are an injustice lol. Um... yeah.
I found this to be rather amusing.
(in a sick morbid sense, so perhaps morality is dying...)
The first time I read this I didn't like it but I read it again today and it IS quite humourous.
But I'm not sure why you strangled her.
As a comment, using the word 'fuck' in every poem obviously degenerates its effect, but otherwise, I found this, as a piece of humor, quite likeable.
I thought it was funny and very unique
I thought it was quite funny.
Weird poem.
Didn't sound or look much like a poem either.
I agree with Racewind.
Holy Jesus Christ Psy...
Ahahahahahahahahahahaha
Yay, now I shall be murdered.
Give me your phone number, I miss your horrid voice and the screamings of LIZ YOU'RE A WENCH
"I want people to know that it's okay to scream FUCK YOU on the internet. It is. You have to release somewhere. "
I wasn't aware that people thought it WASN'T OK. Why don't you just scream out loud? Better than bad poetry.