NonFictionIdot

I loved this poem. It kinda confused me because i thought u were talking about stars but in the end it was a Christmas tree. Very tricky if you ask ...

I wasn't thinking of gay rights when i was reading this either. But i loved the poem,maybe not reason behind it but i still liked it! Keep going!

I want to read more! No far! Put more up on the website!

This is a great poem! I love how your mother is your blessing and how you have Learned to appreciate it. Amazingly written!

Oh my god! I loved it! This poem hit me hard... And made me want to cry. You're gifted and never, ever let any one tell you other wise! Keep ...

This is an amazing piece! I loved it! And i really love your title!

Please, you must keep going. Its like not being able to finish a book. It sooooo irritating! I love this story and now you leave me wanting more!

I loved it! Don't Change a thing to it!!! I'm serious! Don't! Hope you keep going!

Oh GOD! I fell in love with this story!!! Keep going PLEASE!

I loved it but as Forestqueen said you are moving a little too fast. Slow down and show us what was supposed to be the relationship.

Keep writing, i would love to see what happens next!

I liked it. Its good to have your warm ups. And this is a good beging. If you ask me, Don't listen to Rena0421 up there and do what you ...

Keep going! Please I want to read more. Omg! I loved it! You had so errors but you could make them out.If you do write more please, please PM me.

Wow this is really good! I was hoping i could read more but it ended. =( If you put any more of the story up, PM me!

Thanx! That makes it easier.