Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world),
Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!!
Anyway let's get right to it,
He's perfect. THe perfect man has come into my life. But there's a twist, he's not what I've always wanted, for inside him, a monster is growing. A beast within a beast. Not the kind in horror film, but the real kind. The kind you think you love, but they turn on you. And now I bid you goodbye, as I tell you what happened to me just a few years ago, it all started in a small town called FostersVille.
Well this is quite the piece here. It looks like maybe this is meant to be sort of like the prologue to a story of some kind of or generally the preface to something. There's quite a lot of potential baked into this particular piece especially considering quite how unassuming and simple it appears to be on the surface. Its a lovely way to start something like this out.
Diving a little bit deeper into this, there's something about this so called perfect man that really puts an interesting spin on things there. It almost makes it seem like there will be another visitor to this place to try and alter what goes on here and that creates an interesting effect because it seems like on side of two opposing views as opposed to one view.
The personal opinion of this person towards the end does convert those things from less of a certain type of opinion to more of a certainty but it certainly does seem you have to activate some of those arguments to get to the bottom of this. Its an interesting place to start nonetheless because as a reader you end up having to take a few judgment calls before understanding what appears to be the start of something which doesn't normally happen but then it does make this that much more intriguing.
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.