Noelle

Hi there! Your wisely sage is here for a review! After reading this chapter, I have to say that the one thing I remember the most is Fae. Now, that's ...

Hi there! It's your dedicated sage here for a review! :) First off, I'd like to say that I truly enjoyed your first chapter. It works well as a first ...

Hi there! First off, I'd like to say that you've got a really solid idea here. It seems to be a sci-fi/fantasy adventure story. You've got me hooked with this ...

Hi there! I have to say, I really enjoyed reading this. Usually I'm not into these kind of stories. You know, the ones that take place in normal, every day ...

Hi there! Finally back for another review. Sorry it took me so long. Anyway, this is another good chapter you've got here. You're doing a great job progressing the story ...

Hi there! Told you I would be back to read more :) What I like about this chapter is that we get a lot more insight into your character. I ...

Hi there! I watched in awe as the fireworks roared across the night sky. red, blue, green, gold. *there should be a semi-colon here instead of a period. "Red, blue, ...

Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! Let me start of by saying that this story is quite riveting. You grabbed my attention in the beginning and held ...

Hi there! Noelle back for another Review Day review! I swear, this story just keeps getting better. I'm seriously in awe of how realistic this is. I've been through a ...

Hi there! Noelle back for another Review Day review! Warning! More nitpicks will be coming your way! I'm so evil. Bwahahahahahaha! ;) Wow. I am way too hyper this morning. ...

Hi there! Noelle back for another Review Day review! I glanced down at my left arm and my stomach lurched at the sight of it. Although it was only three ...

Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! I saw your newest chapter in the Green Room so I figured I would stop by and read all the previous ...

Hi there! Noelle back for another Review Day review of your novel :) I really like this chapter. Seriously, like your characters are awesome. I started reading this from the ...

Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! Eh, more like a comment, not really a review. This chapter seems a bit unfinished to me. I just got done ...

Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! This story definitely has some potential. There is a lot that you could improve on, but who doesn't really? I'm still ...