Noelle

Hi there! Ember is such a great name! :) I love it when people have "unusual" names in novels. You know, the ones you don't normally hear everyday. I disagree ...

Hi there! Welcome to the site! :) Ah, the horrible panic attack. I hate those things. I had one last night while I was singing at church and I almost ...

Hi there! I'm not going to lie, I had some concerns about you writing from a blind person's POV. How would you really know what they would be thinking or ...

Hi there! Oh my gosh, I love this! So realistic! It's like Asteria was being forced to write this chapter and she's just like, no I won't do it. Now, ...

Hi there! Noelle here back for more :) I'm glad you decided to stick to one character's POV per chapter now. It's a lot more organized and easier to read. ...

Hi there! What a great introduction to your story! Well, it's Chapter 1 really, but it makes for a great introduction. You've given us a setting, characters, and a problem. ...

Hi there! Sorry it took so long for me to get here. I have no excuse. I was just being lazy. But instead a cold, watery deep engulfs me The ...

Hi there! Here I am back for more! :) Ah, a crazy circle of pranks. I found it very amusing to follow this prank as it got more and more ...

Hi there! I'll split my review into each of the characters you have here. That'll be easier for you to follow I'm sure. I'll be pointing out things about each ...

Unicorns! *gasp* Hi there! I absolutely love this chapter. Especially the unicorns. Seriously though, no joke, the unicorns are definitely really cool. You came up with a truly terrifying animal ...

Hi there! You've got a nice introductory chapter here. I know that it's part of the story and all that, but it definitely feels like this is an introductory chapter; ...

Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! First of all, I absolutely love the title. I'm not really sure why. But something about those two words together just ...

Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! The first thing I noticed about this story is that the second paragraph is huge. It made it very hard to ...

Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! I found this story hysterical! In a good way of course! Just everything that happened in this story made me chuckle ...

Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! This was a very interesting story. I really like how you put a spin on the story of Santa Claus and ...