Noelle

Hi there! Noelle back again for another Review Day review! I like the way you're writing this story. It seems very seamless as we go along. I know that time ...

Hi there! Noelle back for another Review Day review! “That’s the younger prince. I’ve taken to calling him Tart. He’s got a nasty attitude, that one.” The sheep had been ...

Hi there! Noelle back for another Review Day review! This is a very informative chapter. I like that we're learning tiny things about this world with each passing chapter. It's ...

Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! The one thing I really like about this is that there is a lot of imagery; especially in your first chapter. ...

Hi there! Noelle back again for another Review Day review! Wow, this is one sinister chapter. I can just feel the evil oozing out from between the lines. Seriously, like ...

Hi there! Noelle back again for another Review Day review! Tired of me yet?? ;) This was another great character development chapter. It's nice for Ariyana and Jellal to have ...

Hi there! Noelle back again for another Review Day review! He looked to be drawing and as I draw closer I can make out the outline of a forest. This ...

Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! So I reviewed your first chapter all the way back on the last Review Day and I haven't visited your novel ...

Hi there! Noelle here again for another Review Day review! "MOM, I'M LEAVING!" she yelled, You don't have to use capitalized letters here. I know that capital letters mean shouting, ...

Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! Wow, you get right to the action now don't you. That's what I love to read! Even though I'm very happy ...

Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! I really like how you slip some comedy into your story as you go. Especially at the end. It isn't any ...

Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! I had some crazy deja-vu as I was reading this. I felt like I had reviewed this before. But in all ...

Hi there! Noelle here for another Review Day review! First things first, you switch between present and past tense quite early on in the story. But then you continue the ...

Hi there! Noelle back again for another Review Day review! “You have a tail?” “did I say that out loud?” “yes.” “shit” This part made me laugh so much! Maybe ...

Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! The sky above the house was the colour of television, tuned to a dead channel when the first whale jumped out ...